Ahh! Sequel! Please! Could you please write a sequel to the Hellfire Trilogy? About how Ran searches for Ken and...uh, yeah! Please! The Hellfire Trilogy is definently my third favorite Weiss Kreuz...The pirate series is definently a winner and Timor Mortis was so shocklingly gory (in a subtle way P) that it totally took my breath away. Actually, you writing in general stole my heart (I know, it's cheesy), because your original works with Deveril and Noel haunted me for at least three months...straight.

So anyway, you writing is delivered so smoothly, which makes you shine out so brilliantly to other writers. You really know how to mold and create stories, and that's mainly (or at least, I think) because of your sentence fluency. Your plot ideas are original too

I guess what I'm trying to say is that your way with words is so...unbelievably free. It's as if you know every single word in the dictionary and you use it to your full advantage, AND the fact that you use comparisons so well that ANY reader can visualize and familiarize themselves with the circumstances that your characters have in your oh-so-twisted plots.

I mean, when I write, I'm like a dam that's stopping all the water from flowing. I have no idea how to say what I try to say and where to start and when I should start typing so that the blinking cursor can stop winking at me from that blank white page...

Grarg, so anyway, what I'm trying to say is that, compared to me, you know how to make your words flow to their highest potential and by stringing them together, you make wonderful, marvelous, and amazing sentence fluency.

Did I mention that you do comparisons so well? They're almost Homeric.

But anyway, enough of my blabber jabber. Please write more Weiss Kreuz, and I hope you can do a sequel for the Hellfire Trilogy! (Could you also update Duality too? I know you have a life and all...but could you write a sequel for this? Please?)

...I *did* say please P

phh... teaser, indeed! *huffs* well, I'll just go searching for the rest then, and could someone please catch the butterflies in my belly?

;3 ja, Bengali!

This is great! Could you at least tell us where Yaoke is posting the rest? Please? I really wanna read more of this. Your a really good writter. Keep up the good work! Bye!

Wow! That story was just a masterpiece! Too bad you're giving it to someone else...

All I could say is that you really have an amazing talent when it comes to writing fics with historical settings...

Could you *PLEASE* just make another story that is quite similar to this one?

*PLEASE*

thank you!

: )

Wow, this was so well written. Thanks for the background information, it seems like an interesting subject to write about. :-)

I was wondering if Yaoke-san had posted the rest of this on her site, and if so if you could link me, as I would love to see how this finishes. My email is if you can tell me.

Again, very well done. You are amazing.

Peace, Love, Empathy:

~*Kat-chan*~

You are wonderful.

_

There's always that special something in your historical fiction; that's obviously a strength of yours, along with many other strengths I'm sure. I started reading this story at around 2:30 in the morning today [laughs] because I've come to tell myself that if it's by Ms. Speare, it must be good and therefore I'll read it right away.

It doesn't matter who, but someone, anyone, please post more. *_*

[laughs] Have a great day!

Mei

o_o Wow. That was great. Loved the writing style. Yaoke-san is one lucky lady and I can only hope that she posts the rest of this piece.

Lately, there seems to have been a lack of well-written RanKen fanfiction and...this just...blew me away.

-Shime

That was SO well written. Wow. It's lovely. Yaoke is extremely lucky to have the rest of this _

O.o That was exotic and... gosh... nicely written. I mean the flow thing. The way the whole scene is brought alive. Quite impressive and a very nice intro. I sure want to know what will happen next. Keep it up! Update soon please.

this was so good! liked the setting and it was well researched. loved that ran let ken go! but then he found him again and kissed him! yaoke is a lucky girl - hope she will share your gift with us all.

I love this fic! I wish I could write that beautifully. Please continue soon!

Oh wow, this story is awesome! I really can't wait to read more..

*_* Yaoke-sama...::gives lots of ken and ran gifts:: Happy birthday Now, will you be a kind and generous soul and allow us to read the other parts of this? . Or Speare-sama...or somebody. I know I'll drive myself insane never knowing the ending...please?

Wow! I love it already! It was a wonderful first chapter. The plot is excellent; It is obviously an AU, ne?

Ken is quite IC as is Ran. I think that's a hard feat to manage and yet you did it.

Terrific start. I hope you continue soon. _

~Zeto

*bows deeply before you*... i'm not worthy... i'm not worthy;;...

honestly, you are really a fic goddess... and man, i can't even begin to say how happy i am that you wrote ran/ken again!

i always love the in depth information you gave on the historical background of your story. it kinda strengthen the story and makes the story more real.

absolutely great job!

and ran and ken... your ken is always so slurpy ;)! you make me really want to have a ken of my own... and ran as the fallen angel was just a nice one

huh, i kinda hoped you'd write lemon in this story ;)... hehehe, wishful thinking, I know...

anyway, great story as always... the kind of story that i can only dream to write;;... anyway, yaoke-san better post the rest of this soon, or else;;...