Halo Author, Are you actively writing? I am so interested in your work. My name is Dina I am a talent scout for a fast-growing platform. I want to offer you something related to your work. May I know how to reach you professionally?

This is a really good start! I can’t wait to see where you take it (although I’m always team Edward)

Thank you for having Bella's feelings for Edward not drop off the map randomly. This feels really well done and like it will turn into something amazing

This is a very great start. I can’t wait to see more.