|Reviews for Vignette|
| nostratic chapter 3 . 9/10/2009
you are such a good writer. i don't have the energy to elaborate and refer to the text, etc...
you're just so amazingly good.
| natOfbar chapter 3 . 6/14/2007
it's amazing how you managed to weave streams of THOUGHTS into a story. this is a really good piece of writing, i cant imagine why it only got 60 reviews. it deserves so much more! i think this is the first time i've read something so plotless yet kept me hooked throughout. must be the little bits of humor injected in between.. or the huge bits..LOL. naruto and sasuke's rivalry has never been potrayed in such an interesting light. you are an amazing author.
*scurries off to read Attraction* yes, i hate reading sequels without reading the story before, even if it doesnt make a diff.
| sasunarusasuluv chapter 3 . 1/19/2007
I can't even find the words to express how this made me feel, and what's good is that I bet you don't even read your reviews anymore, and lookie, I have tears running down my cheeks. This was amazing.
The things you explored, and the way it makes you (talking in second person), rephrase. The things you explored, and the way I feel right now from reading it... I can't tell if it's because it touched something in me or that I recognized what it means when I read someone who thinks so hard about all those fuzzy elements in this damn thing made for kids.
It's so well written, you don't sit around and say, gee, that's well written. It's like perfect, like water? Hm. But damn. I mean it's amazing how the kissing made me feel, it was so... raw, I guess, but how you went into Sasuke's personality and worked with how emotionally stunted he was, and how you limited the reader to what Sasuke was capable of. It kills me. And I won't say it was IC, but that's what it was about. How you tapped into both of them, and gave them a chance I guess. Plus, it really means a lot to me when people think for so long on these two people that they can write an extremely long chapter. It takes a lot, a lot, a lot of thought to come up with even a paragraph that reflects what they're like, and you did *so* much.
Gah. It just means a lot to me, and it THRILLS me you won't read this. I don't even mean that sarcastically. You'll never know how much it meant to me, and I'll never know why you wrote this. It sounds like a deal. But damn. I think I can die knowing there's a story like this out there, that somebody captured it all. Yes.
| arsg66 chapter 3 . 1/7/2006
XD That a good fic!
| Trowa no Miko chapter 3 . 12/4/2005
Wow! This chapter’s so much longer than the others. Hehe… So much angst. Hehe… And the thought of Naruto running around nude… XD Aw… That is way too cute! Mommy Iruka has to take care of sick Naruto-kun. I love your narrative. I’ve noticed a lot of minor grammar errors (just left out words or switched letters). There’s nothing damaging to the plot, but enough to where readers could get confused or annoyed. I’d recommend getting a beta to go over the technicalities. You have the caracter’s personalities down perfectly. I especially love your portrayal of Kakashi and Iruka. Wow! I almost feel bad for Sasuke when he’s confused about Naruto’s nightmares. Though the stupid idiot doesn’t understand that Naruto’s been shit on just as much as him… Aw… The scene with Naruto crying is adorable! Over all, I liked this fic. Your narrative is beautiful and it’s kinda turning me on to SasuNaru. I’m generally a Gaaruto fan, but certain fics can draw me to other pairs. Good job!
| Trowa no Miko chapter 2 . 12/4/2005
Keke… Poor Naruto. Soap *is* dangerous. Heheheh… Giant Sasuke lizard. Cute! Hm… Naruto could have breathed on the marker tip to warm it up. Hehe… Why would a Sasuke fan defile his face? Hehehe… Naruto got caught! And he kissed Sasuke! Bwahaha! Cute ficcy!
| Trowa no Miko chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
You have an interesting prose. It conveys the emotion in your fic really well. I’m excited for the next chapter. Yay for angst!
| WolfBane2 chapter 3 . 9/8/2005
"Remember to run like hell. Running like hell is important.
Might have to run like hell for a while."
(laughs) That's still my favorite quote from the fic. I loved how you managed to combine fluff, angst, and humor into one. Oh the humor. (hands author a taco and wanders off)
| Wistful-Eyes chapter 3 . 6/26/2005
Wow. I was so tense through most of the third chapter. Sasuke was really... ha. Wrecking the home like an immature little... and then going a little crazy... Well, it was really awesome. Really gripped me. :P
| theGreyPebble chapter 3 . 2/26/2005
god. please write more, please continue, because sasuke is so god damn cute in this fic.
| blisblop chapter 3 . 2/21/2005
I am impressed all to ,your Sasuke going off his nut,I have seen a young boy do just that out of utter frustration(10ish),go on his back like a dead beatle,scream way down in his throat,Roll,well when i read this,it was like watching it the fic not reading it(this peice was magical for me)I laughed for about 3 minutes,I now Know that the muscles on your face attach somewhere behind your ears cause thats how much it end where Sasuke starts,..what he started,the writing was just incredable.I feel kinda high after should publish.I wish I could do justice to this but...anyway,now I go read everything else I can find by ..bops away.
| ad deletion chapter 3 . 1/10/2005
That's really good. You are sort of angsty. The drawing on his face seemed a little odd, like you just put it there to further your plot without it really connecting. But the descriptions...blink. I wish I could see sensory details as well as you can. There're amazing!
| Katie chapter 3 . 10/26/2004
This was a very good story! This last chapter was more than a little strange, but that just made it better! Still, I am more than a little miffed at Sasuke for burning Naruto's stuff. *BAD* Sasuke! He could have read the comics instead of burning them! Anyway, I enjoyed reading this!
| Minitsu chapter 3 . 7/21/2004
Beautifully well written and a very cute, suitable ending. Definitely one of my all time favorite SasuNaru ficcies. Splendid job, madame.
| Kitty Meow chapter 3 . 6/15/2004
Wah...please do not end it here! You have not yet exhausted the over-waffness! Please continue ;_;