Reviews for The Elder Scrolls: Ultimate Dragonborn
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2
I was hoping for Ben to turn into Heatblast and for the Dragonborn to then mistake him for a Flame Atronach. Would Diamondhead remind the Dragonborn of a Storm Atronach? Now, while the Dragonborn is a good person, a hero in his own world, he is also a mercenary who kills people, so if Ben finds out, he'll likely get on the Dragonborn's case about that. Looking forward to the Dragonborn's thoughts of Ben's forms, the concept of aliens, Gwen and Kevin's alien heritage, and the modern world in general.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21
In all honesty of all the fanfics I’ve read from you this one took me by surprise. It’s a lovely surprise though; I hope you give it a couple chapters; before you continue on.
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legendarydeagonknight chapter 1 . 1/20
well I hope a next update

something about your dragonborn that bothers me sometimes is that even though he appears in most of your stories in the elder scrolls we don't really know much about him, just the essentials and that's not that bad but it would be great to know essential facts about him like

his stats, you know what I'm talking about, his abilities, like one handed, two handed, alchemy, archery, enchanting, alteration, restoration, destruction, conjuration, illusion, heavy armor, light armor, block, pickpockect, lockpicking , sneak, speech, smithing

another point is if he is a thane of any of the hold but of all since if he did certain missions they should have declared him a thane in whatever one you have implied that in some of your stories but you have not confirmed it yet

another thing that you have also said is that he is against the stomcloaks and in favor of the imperial legion but what we do not know exactly is if he is part of them or only helps them when they ask him to be something like an honorary member

Just as we don't know how he deals with the Thieves Guild or the Dark Brotherhood, I wouldn't say that he is part of the second, but of the first I do see possibilities that he has dealings with them or has helped them in their respective missions.

or if you have optional properties in the game such as mansions, cabins, boats, even business with companies

apart from sheogorath we don't know much about his interactions with other princes, particularly I think he would have a lot of contact with azura, sangine, meridia, hircine, malacth among others, thus being the champion of one of them thus receiving their respective power artifacts

You have also shown that he can summon his weapons, armor, clothes, items, magical artifacts and potions among many others. In general, he is a walking armory that can have any weapon or armor as the situation requires.

In general, I do not tell you how you should write, they are your stories and you decide how to do them. These are just suggestions to help you when it comes to adding nuances to the character. Anyway, thanks for reading this comment. I like your stories. I hope you update them more frequently so that know more about the plot lines you create
Arthanos chapter 1 . 1/20
Fantastic start. I hope you update soon.
RonaldM40196867 chapter 1 . 1/18
To some people age matters.

Ben is pretty OP.

I love the dialogue, very comfy.