Reviews for Daphne Greengrass and the Preemptive Adulterer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What a wonderful and adorable and touching and cheery story! Glad I stumbled over it as ive mostly stopped reading plain harry potter stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait I thought he wasn't going to take her to Black Manor because of the Fidelius? Surely the Blacks owned other property? Couldn't he have just told her that Dumbles is using it so it would be a bad idea to go to that place? |
![]() ![]() ![]() definitely one of the best portrayals of Haphne i've ever read. well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I mostly enjoyed the story, but there’s a questionable amount of “men pigs/women strong” messaging that makes it difficult to stay in stride. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice ending of the story. Something tells me Mrs. Crabbe and Mrs. Goyle aren't going to use the money for tutoring. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm surprised how calm Ron took Daphne being Harry's girlfriend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to agree with Harry; Hermione still has her rose-tinted glasses, even after five years at Hogwarts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad Draco paid dealy for using Unforgivable, unlike canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione is a harpy. She thinks that she is morally superior to everyone, criticizing the decisions of others, without considering that not everyone has an easy life. |
![]() ![]() Awwww soooo sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really great. Perfect pacing, perfect length for the story. I wish more people would follow your example and start the story they want to tell at the point where they want to tell it. And how crazy is it that you had 3 epilogues that all managed to be less self-indulgent than the canon epilogue, and actually less self-indulgent than pretty much any other epilogue I remember reading. This really was great, thanks for writing it! |
![]() ![]() Great story - your writing is excellent and I can’t wait to read whatever you do next. I just wish this story was longer - there is definitely scope to go beyond the epilogues. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very enjoyable story, im exited for your future works. Thanks for sharing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very enjoyable story. Thanks for writing it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A little disjointed near the end, but good enough to rate an "O" an your final report card. |