Reviews for Daphne Greengrass and the Preemptive Adulterer
Tribernator chapter 12 . 5/7/2022
What a wonderful and adorable and touching and cheery story! Glad I stumbled over it as ive mostly stopped reading plain harry potter stories.
EternalAnglo94 chapter 3 . 5/5/2022
Wait I thought he wasn't going to take her to Black Manor because of the Fidelius?

Surely the Blacks owned other property? Couldn't he have just told her that Dumbles is using it so it would be a bad idea to go to that place?
Zeromaru Chaos Mode chapter 12 . 5/4/2022
definitely one of the best portrayals of Haphne i've ever read.

well done.
Puff Me chapter 12 . 5/3/2022
I mostly enjoyed the story, but there’s a questionable amount of “men pigs/women strong” messaging that makes it difficult to stay in stride.
Kairan1979 chapter 12 . 5/2/2022
Nice ending of the story.
Something tells me Mrs. Crabbe and Mrs. Goyle aren't going to use the money for tutoring.
Kairan1979 chapter 8 . 5/1/2022
I'm surprised how calm Ron took Daphne being Harry's girlfriend.
Kairan1979 chapter 6 . 5/1/2022
I have to agree with Harry; Hermione still has her rose-tinted glasses, even after five years at Hogwarts.
Kairan1979 chapter 5 . 5/1/2022
I'm glad Draco paid dealy for using Unforgivable, unlike canon.
juni.clon.ado chapter 12 . 5/1/2022
Hermione is a harpy. She thinks that she is morally superior to everyone, criticizing the decisions of others, without considering that not everyone has an easy life.
Guest chapter 12 . 4/28/2022
Awwww soooo sweet
LongSelfindulgentReviews chapter 12 . 4/27/2022
This was really great. Perfect pacing, perfect length for the story. I wish more people would follow your example and start the story they want to tell at the point where they want to tell it.

And how crazy is it that you had 3 epilogues that all managed to be less self-indulgent than the canon epilogue, and actually less self-indulgent than pretty much any other epilogue I remember reading.

This really was great, thanks for writing it!
Crypt chapter 12 . 4/26/2022
Great story - your writing is excellent and I can’t wait to read whatever you do next.

I just wish this story was longer - there is definitely scope to go beyond the epilogues.
wobbelhd chapter 12 . 4/25/2022
A very enjoyable story, im exited for your future works. Thanks for sharing :)
Dauntes chapter 12 . 4/24/2022
Very enjoyable story. Thanks for writing it. :)
Mionefan chapter 12 . 4/23/2022
A little disjointed near the end, but good enough to rate an "O" an your final report card.
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