Reviews for Daphne Greengrass and the Preemptive Adulterer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Delightful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() . . . omg . . . the Ward Book! You set that up beautifully. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I *love* where this is going. Delightful story. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() Going on my list of favorites that I'm going to come back and reread several times in the future. Congratulations on finishing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very fun story to read! The beginning of it reminds me of another story I've read here though it was Harry going off the astronomy tower and Daphne saving him, but that's basically where the similarities end. You managed to squeeze a good amount of plot development into a fairly short story and I find that admirable, especially by having a few minor time jumps and leaving a few bits up to the reader's imagination. Congrats on a well written story, thank you for all of your hard work. Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a lovely little story! I greatly enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very good story, well done by the way. :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great ending. I like how you wrapped everything up neatly. I also liked your more mature Ron. Thank you for sharing your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you have had Harry and Daphne carry the battle to the Death Eaters. I also like the pie attacks. A nice story. Thank you for sharing your writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story, great end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read the whole thing through! Fucking amazing plot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful work. You got the romance of it incredibly well |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn. highly unrealistic and highly out of character for harry as well but who fucking cares tbh? we're all here for romance anyways. |