Reviews for Mistake
pain in the mikta chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Nicely angsty little fic...
Celtic Cross chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
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Celtic Cross chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
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BugExterminator chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
for being bored it wus a good story, poor jack!
movielover03 chapter 1 . 7/1/2003
I can't even do stuff this good when i'm trying good work please write more!
JezRoll chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Oh my gosh. That was really good. It was sad. *sniff* I absolutely loved it! keep writing, you have got a great style, I wish I could just spout off stuff like that when I'm bored.
miscbills chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Always knew Jack was a survior.
Moon Fox chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Been reading a lot of your stuff lately and this was another great.
krusty chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
great story! just what i needed!
the female apophis chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
I loved it!

Could you do a sequel?

PLEASE!

WITH EXTRA CANDY COATED SUGAR ON TOP?

*sneezes*

Keep up the most excellent work (not to sound cliche or anything). Hope to see more from you soon.
DA chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
I liked this. I also would like more of this. Please.
Mara Jade Jedi chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
oh this was good!

but you know what though...you'll have to finish it or write more!

i dunno if thats what you were intending to do anyway but PLEASE WRITE MORE!
darren chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
wow i defenitiv like this story very much! why don't you go on with it it is greate please write aboute littel jack
AL11 chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
Keep it going! i loved it- a tad short thou- thats why you've got to write more, now, soon any time now... still waiting, well keep up the good work and i want to know more! Al
ednyadove chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
This was such a cut estory. Sad but cute...
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