Reviews for Origin
SPark681 chapter 5 . 9/12
Hmm, so Itachi and Kisame might be going after Naruto their funeral anyways keep up the great work!
10tailsJinchurikiNaruto chapter 5 . 5/24
Can you add Hinata, ino, kurenai and Yugao Uzuki (purple hair anbu) to the harem please
NarutoTiny0852 chapter 4 . 4/25
How dare you, you need to make it so the genra is romance there's to many romantic things in this story.
Borello chapter 5 . 2/1
interesting work.
Kingofsenju chapter 1 . 2/2
Just don’t add a female kurama
SugamDewan chapter 5 . 2/1
Interesting story Please continue
Borello chapter 4 . 1/29
good work.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 5 . 1/31
Whoowee! Insane chapter! And ooooh crud! Not only has Zabuza been powered up (likely Haku as well), but both Kisame AND Itachi are here as well! This can only end up going one way: utter chaos! I’m already getting excited at the possible prospects this could bring! I’m also really enjoying Sasuke’s and Kiba’s interactions along with the former beginning to lighten up! And oh~? Seems Kurenai might consider Kakashi as a (possibly) better BF than Asuma! Fascinating…
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 4 . 1/30
AW HECK YEAH! Looking forward to what’s next!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 3 . 1/30
NICE! Fantastic work!
Borello chapter 3 . 1/28
good work. but i wonder if naruto relate to a thunder god as zeus or thor.
RealOverlord76 chapter 4 . 1/30
This story is really good. I hope you keep writing.
Borello chapter 2 . 1/27
nice work.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/26
I’m not sure on kuro for the harem maybe mei or haku or both instead. I like that I got rid of Sakura she’s just a worthless bitch. Mikoto as mage was a wonderful surprising twist. Maybe make naruto in the future learn kenjutsu to honor his mother besides fuin honors both parents
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 2 . 1/28
Ha ha! What fun! Quite exciting! All of it!
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