I love it! I can see where this is going with Itachi- Mikoto romance and thus slowly coming to see this village as his home. A tried and tested trope...but maybe there could be a twist so rare in fanfiction that it is nearly unheard of?

What if...he remains true to his wife and dies satisfied after having done his duties? This has beautiful tragic potential!

Come on, I know you can see it too :D! Sometimes a heart really only has space for one love. Discard the cliche route of finding new love! Hold to the old and die with a smile on your face. Let us feel the melancholic, yet beautiful end we never get to see in fanfiction...

Finally caught up on some chapters. Great progress!

Its refreshing to have a good read but I'm kinda bummed that I ran out of chapters so fast. I kid, but that's the marking of a great story. Hope you update soon.

Happy new year. Hope you’re well and I’m keeping my fingers cross for an update soon.

Cheers.

Thanks for the chappy.

Great chapter. I like what's brewing with the Mist. The direction you're taking Kaito sounds like it will be very fruitful. Excited to see how Itachi and Kaito will develop together.

Just finished reading it in full, and I have to say bravo, good damn chapter! Can't wait to see how this goes with Itachi since I know he's one of your favorites, oh the thoughts that must be running in your head. Keep up the good work and buckle down on the writing brother!

Sharp

Phase one of getting kiato laid complete.

also a great chapter!

great chapter!

things are getting juicy and im still waiting for an update. you are a good author who can bring life to your OC. i wonder if this clue will lead to Mizukage as he is currently controlled by Obito.

Is last wind abandoned? It’s freaking amazing

This is such a great chapter. The pacing, the characters. Everything

For an OC character this story is amazing. You seemed to have found the sweet spot between an over powered character balanced with good storytelling and character, which honestly, most authors are terrible at. The way you write brings the character to life making it easy to picture your Fourth Hokage and not to mention your cool fight scenes - the Wind Walker in particular being seriously well thought out. You seem to be hinting at a potential relationship with Mikoto maybe? If so I would want to see how you handle developing romance. So far the flash backs with Kushina are really well done and you drive home the sense of loss beautifully. Now onto to some wish fulfillment as fan. PLEASE note these are just what I would want to see - don’t take this seriously as this is your story. Take this as straight wish fulfillment:

More Mikoto - she’s my favourite (waifu) character
Kaito going all out - That Wind Walker Jutsu is the shit
Kushina finding out about Kaito - Hence him getting his closer and allowing him to move on
Kaito teaching Itachi - It seems to just be work.
Naruto and Kaito future interactions
Hawk summons vs other summons - mind you, best depictions of Hawks I’ve EVER seen. Makes me wonder what the fuck Sasuke was doing.
Wind Walker vs Lighting Armour - I have no shame in begging to see this happen
Kaito vs Orochimaru

I’ll stop as my list can go on and on. I like the way you write and I’ll be keeping an eye on this story. Cheers mate.

Hey. So finally read all your stories. You have some serious talent my friend. Keep letting your ideas and inspiration flow because you got the gift of a great writer. Never forget that you hear? You got the touch! You got the powwweeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!

*cue electric guitar*

Lol keep on writing!

Another ghosted chapter with another goated fight.

Keep up the hard work, king.