Reviews for Storm Front
Guest chapter 13 . 4/10
I know its late but would you please continue? I wanna know moarr!
freyja0taku chapter 13 . 2/17
Chap 15 is great.. "with our itch nicely scratched" line cracked me up.. XD .. It's so amazing that it still has funny scenes and heartbreaking scenes.. I wonder if you'll still add some stories about this two here cause it's been 5 years but I hope and wish that you will because it's so awesome! I hope you didn't mind my reviews xD .. I just want to say that I really enjoyed reading this.. :3
freyja0taku chapter 12 . 2/17
Yay.. I searched chap 7 and 12 and it's good.. xD .. The sweet and funny moments in chap 13 are GOLD! x3 He's gonna buy the ring in chap 14.. Yay!
freyja0taku chapter 10 . 2/16
My heart ached for different reasons in the last chap. He finally-!.. In chap11
Yay for protective Laguna and I'm really glad that Raine can fight.. Another yay for their moment :3
freyja0taku chapter 8 . 2/16
Wow I really enjoyed reading this chap.. The reason why Kiros said "I don't know" at first when Laguna asked for Julia is so believable. Your version of what Ellone said when Laguna screamed was cute.. xD Raine's realization of who Julia was to Laguna is so great! .. The added things to what was shown in the game is really amazing! The only mistake I saw was when you implied that he patrolled in the morning so he was sleeping in here.. when it was said in the game that his first patrol in the morning was with Kiros.. (correct me if I'm wrong3
freyja0taku chapter 7 . 2/15
Okay so there's no chapter 7.. hmm.. But aww for protective Laguna and too bad he didn't do it.. Maybe he will in the future chaps and I'm sure he did it in canon.. xD
freyja0taku chapter 6 . 2/15
Ouch for chap four.. But at least she realized that she likes him.. Chapter 5 is cute coz it shows a sweet family moment.. It made me more envious of snowing countries and now I want to have fun in the snow too.. xD Ouch again for the short argument but it's still great.. Hahah at the end of chap 6 :3
freyja0taku chapter 3 . 2/15
Waahh.. hahah.. Laguna teasing Raine about spanking is so cute.. x3 .. Ellone's drawing is also touching.. It's awesome! :3
freyja0taku chapter 1 . 2/13
Wow! It's great.. Real life irritation for the added responsibility.. hahah.. xD
Marin-sama chapter 13 . 5/11/2014
I know it's been a long time since you last update, but please, don't give up o this story! It is great! I really, really hope you continue writing it! :)
Marin-sama chapter 11 . 5/11/2014
Oh my God! This is such a great story! I started reading it today, and I couldn't stop! I mean I just stopped to look for the chapters that are not here in . I could not find them on your profile, but I've found them on this site: fanfic/view_ /20456/76272#fic_c
You are such a great writer! I do hope you update this fic someday! Thanks very much for writing it. I never paid much atention to Raine, only Laguna. But now I like her as much as I like Laguna and Squall. (Sorry for any mistakes, English is not my first language)
Bebedora chapter 13 . 4/9/2013
This is so sweet! I can't believe I never saw this before! Raine and Laguna are my favorite pair from the game. I know this hasn't been updated in quite some time, but I hope you'll decide to continue it at some point.

Also, I would be interested in reading the chapters not listed, but I couldn't find them with the link on your profile. Help!

I hope that you update this, it's too good to let fall to the wayside.
IcegoddessLexra chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
OMG ARAFEL. I just read YOUR WHOLE story (even the chapters you removed, and might I say 'saucy') and just ;3; ASJKLDFHADSKLJFHASDJKLFH This is just so adorable.

I rp as Laguna on Tumblr. My username is Moombaliberator. And HYNE! This fanfiction. ASDFHJASDF YOU MA'AM HAVE TUGGED AT MY HEART STRINGS.

Also a long time ago I read your other FFVIII fanfic with Squall and Laguna and Raine and T3T I had no idea you were the author of that drabble when a friend (My Raine to my Laguna 3) recommended this to me. GAAAH I HOPE YOU'RE CONTINUING THIS ;3;
CielFury chapter 13 . 11/30/2012
Wow. I love this story! It's rare to see this pairing in fanfics (it's always Squinoa haha) but this was very romantic, endearing, funny, sad, and just beautiful. I hope you update soon, your writing is one of the best I've ever seen. I was hooked from the first chapter and that's a great thing. Favorited! _
Guest chapter 13 . 7/4/2012
I love the story. Cant wait till the next chapter.
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