Me encantaa. Ya quiero leer los siguientes capítulos

Again Patronus... This world of magic is so simple. There are no others amazins spell - just Patronus and of course only Harry can perform it with poker face! After all, it's so hard to stick a wand in the sky and think about a $100,000 a month salary. in every fanfiction, Harry makes a Patronus and the whole Hogwarts is in complete awe. Can Harry to do smth else? Forgetting Patronus and his resistance to Imperio... Headmaster can perform some super advanced transfiguration. Tom can fly without broom and other things. And our "powerfull" Harry leaves with his patronus)

I really like your work, great chapter.
It's wonderful how you create an deep character for young Bellatrix and don't paint her as a crazy monster. I can't wait for Harry's wrath on the Deatheaters-in-becoming - I wonder if he will get them silently one by on or in public. Also why not hint some persons to Voldis pedigree.

really cant wait until harry announces himself as the lord peverell

nice and interesting chapter :)

I'm sorry to tell you this but Harry is way to civil with Bellatrix. No matter how much he wants to fuck her he can't be treating her like a regular student when she acts like he isn't even human. He doesn't even slight her in his polite talks. He just acts like she doesn't insult him all the time. Especially considering how much influence Voldemort already has. I understand their the pairing but that doesn't make it ok.

Nice chapter. Cant wait for more harryxbella. Thought i am sad that Harry wont be with felicia, you wrote her very likeable.
Please rescue narcissa from her fate with malfoy, i always thought that someone so elite like narcissa Black is out of malfoys league. I mean the malfoys used to herd goats or sheeps back in france, Not at all worthy of a Black, who are rumored to be a direct line from morgan le fay herself. Maybe have Sirius or another Black child attending hogwarts Write to Arcturus, He could take an interest in Harry. Good luck and have fun writing.

Awesome chapter ty.

I hope Harry ends up godfather of Daphne and Tonks.

Can Narcissa join the Harry/Bella pairing later to save her from being sold off to the Malfoy’s.

Harry should also remember to empty the RoR and get the other vanishing cabinet, invest in muggle companies and maybe get that suitcase that Newt Scamander has to keep the Basilisk instead of killing it.

i change my mind from last chap. hellatrix all the way baby

Noice

Try to understand what "suspension of disbelief" means because you utterly fail at it.

Great chapter.
Please keep on updating.

I too hope that you pair Harry with Felicia instead

Alright, I was pretty interested to see where this goes, but this story's got some problems. The characterization is all over the place and everyone seems to be either a bond villain or James bond with anger issues. The characters have laughable motivations, the dialogue is janky, and the sentences are structured weird. I'll still stick around, but this story could definitely use a couple beta readers to clean it up.

Excellent chapter, and interesting seeing the characters in a new light.