Alright, I was pretty interested to see where this goes, but this story's got some problems. The characterization is all over the place and everyone seems to be either a bond villain or James bond with anger issues. The characters have laughable motivations, the dialogue is janky, and the sentences are structured weird. I'll still stick around, but this story could definitely use a couple beta readers to clean it up.

Excellent chapter, and interesting seeing the characters in a new light.

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Can't wait for Harry/ Bellatrix!

Why not be with Felicia instead of Bellatrix

Here's my hope that you have Harry pair up with Felicia not Bellatrix and help the black sisters. Awaiting more.

I like it

Looking forward to more

tbh i enjoyed harrys interaction with felicia. hope you consider her to be paired with harry

really nice chapter :) i really enjoyed reading this

It's good that this harry isn't a brute, if he wants the Slytherin house to acknowledge him as an equal or better then he needs to do something in a slytherin way just like how tom did it..
And I like how Narcissa and Bellatrix is very blunt and insulting when it comes to harry since he's supposedly a mudblood, unlike andromeda who is very neutral so she won't be get her sisters' attention that she doesn't agree with the pureblood supremacy..

Harry not noticing that his mum blushed when he kissed her hand, still the oblivious boy lol..

The only nitpick I have in this chapter is how easy minerva gave a slytherin student a hundred points, points like that is rarely given unless ofcourse you're a Gryffindor named harry potter, Dumbledore likes to praise his golden boy afterall..

Seems interesting. I'm interested to see where this goes.

An interesting beginning, I am interested to see how it goes

intéressant

Nice story i really like it ..

Please dont make this into another harem. You already did that with the previous story. Keep the pairing as it is.