Nice read so far. I’m probably a bit biased… I’m a sucker for overpowered story’s…

awesome story

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harry is kind of a dumbass here.

I just found this fic I absolutely love it I love Bellas patronus and their interactions I can't wait to see the blacks unite against the world and the fact they still arrogant to certain things is great as it humanize them better

Can't wait for the next chapter!

cringe cringe cringe alert

EXCELLENT
MERCI POUR LA LECTURE

Where is ch 7

Great, an other golddigger using someone else's work.

clichés are not bad when they are well written, but in your case it is unfortunately the opposite. At first I thought that Bellatrix's mentality would be very contrary to Harry's and it would have been excellent if she gradually changed her personality but instead you decided to ruin it by taking the easy way out. Harry is too powerful and it is obvious that everything is done so that he has always been favored by the circumstances. a character that doesn't go through development is a Gary stu, in this case your version of Harry Potter. don't take it the wrong way but this type of story without development without difficulties something that makes Harry grow as a character generally likes people who are not very mature in a nutshell the typical perfect superpowered character without flaws that everyone world cares and women love simply because he is a Gary Stu. I read your other works and they are quite similar to each other, you follow the same type of writing. maybe you don't care but if you don't start developing your characters you're going to keep falling into the same cliché. I recommend that you read the author the black resurgence, although it is not exempt from faults, they are not as many as yours, it is only advice. I don't know English very well but I think you can understand some of what I've told you

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loved this story and loved this chapter.. can't wait for the next update. it will be exciting to see the fallout of the events

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

This is a cool story. It’s a unique take on powerful Harry going back in time. I like getting to see rare characters like Charlus and Arcturus. Thanks for writing this and I am looking forward to seeing how things heat up now that Harris will be all over the news of Britain