Must “slimy” be used as an insult to Slytherins? It sounds very childish and inaccurate, as snakes themselves have smooth dry scales. Unless you’re trying to use that to portray immaturity…

Ah. There. I was wondering what would happen to the other Deathly Hallows. Love this fic.

love is a emotion not magic.

question the use of a unforgivable is a one way ticket to soul sucker island no matter what.
meaning there illegal everywhere in the magical world meaning there not legal to use in honor duels meaning malfoy jr's ass should be heading to soul sucker island right after the duel.

and done with my reread. I love it just as much as I did the first time. Truly one of my fave stories

returned for a re-read after some time...and "Not physicaly, no..." vis a vis abuse is only true for the movies. In the books there is physical abuse. Vernon did abuse Harry & even abuses dudley once by choking his own son, Dudley and friends "harry hunt" and beat on Harry constantly, Marge sicks her dog ripper on Harry to bite his legs, and Patunia swings a hot iron pan at Harry's head.

what? why would he sell 100% of his company shares?

ugh why does majority of hp ff author's have fetish to make their adult character a child, go to school again and all that jazz. Why cant they try writing their adult character as adults...

It's certainly not a happy ending... it still feels wrong somehow, but I'll take it. PFaFF is without a doubt one of my favorite fics of all time. FBA was difficult seeing the path they went down. Regardless, thanks for sharing! You have a real talent for writing.

I think you lost me this chapter :/ it already feels like a Cadmean victory. It's not so much a problem of who died, but what was done with the death.

Just a general comment on a word I've noticed that I think is being misused quite a bit in this story. You use the word "stiffened" a lot and I think you mean to use "stifled" instead. Stifle as in repress, suppress, smother, hold back, etc

Dude of you, really.

So Florence is the spy? Or is it just good old PP?

Harry's approach to dealing with Marlene here definitely hints more towards him changing for the worse.

That went muchhh better than I feared... I hope, but you're sneaky so we'll see lol