Reviews for Fairborn Adventures |
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healeroffates chapter 5 . 2/9/2022 Wow I really like this take, I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work! |
Wynn Silver chapter 1 . 2/9/2022 In reference to growth, it's "stunted" and not "stunned". On another note, good start. Looking forward to more. |
Fallenrouz chapter 5 . 2/9/2022 Please save regulus black. Sirius and Regulus both alive would be perfect for house of Black, they balance each other. I imagine if sirius becomes lord then all book stuff regardless grey or dark will be out. And i as a Ravenclaw wouldn't survive that. |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/8/2022 peverell should be something like Grey Lord or leading neutral faction with help of potters and blacks to balance Light lord and Dark lord |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/8/2022 Why saving just order family? Why not try to save Blacks as well? I mean it’s too late for bellatrix now but Narcissa and Regulus can be saved, right? Severus can also be saved. He took Peverell name shouldn’t that give him political clout and power to start something apart from being choice from Marlene. He already have Charlus with him, he can convince Arctus. Two can back him if Harry agrees to stay away from alby’s crook nose. |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/8/2022 I love your idea of the story and I’m enjoying how it setting up but this is usually when stories like yours really change for the worst . I love your previous story so I’m hoping that you will not fall into that trope as other authors have. Please use silence when dealing with Dumbledore. I’ve always hated how characters basically spilled their being stumbled door or give him enough rope so they can hang them with it. He’s not obligated to tell anyone any of his past or his secrets please don’t make him feel like he’s obligated to do so. Also hopefully this won’t be a redemption story for fucking death eaters. |
Mr.BrownOptometrist chapter 5 . 2/9/2022 great chap, keep up the awesome work |
OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla chapter 5 . 2/9/2022 Harry Peverell has certainly left a wonderful first impression. Had it not been for his desire to be close to The Marauders and Lily Evans, Harry Peverell would have likely been sorted in either Ravenclaw or Slytherin, preferably Ravenclaw so it would give him an opportunity to interact with Marlene McKinnon. Not that he can't interact with her anyways anytime he likes. It's a mutual attraction between Harry and Marlene after all. Can he save her from her pre-destined fate? Rabastan Lestrange intends to put the new student in his place, but Thomas Avery, familiar with the Peverell name, warns his fellow Slytherin Housemate not to act recklessly. We all know Harry Peverell will put them in their places like The Boss he is. |
OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla chapter 4 . 2/9/2022 I hope you don't intend to torment Marlene McKinnon for too long with her courtship to Rabastan Lestrange, especially now that she has found her perfect match with Harry Peverell. By the way, it's supposed to be Elder Wand, not Elderwand. I wonder, if Harry has no issues with The Marauders, then how will he treat Severus Snape, especially since he knows Severus was once Lily Evans' best friend once upon a time? Don't blame Harry for his perspective on Remus Lupin and Peter Pettigrew. For now, it's wait and see approach. |
OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla chapter 3 . 2/9/2022 Oh dear! Dorea actually thought Charlus would cheat on her with another woman? HA! I can't blame her, considering Harry resembles James with the exception of their eyes, but it also helps that Harry is a bit more bulky and taller as well than James, so you can tell them apart pretty well. Harry's investment opportunity with Jon Nimbus will pay off tremendously in time. The Peverell coffers will be filled to the brim with Galleos, Sickles and Knuts respectively, hehehehehe! How much of the political landscape of Magic Britain and the rest of the Magical world will change, with the Most Ancient and Noble House of Peverell back in the public eye? Albus Dumbledore is intrigued, while Fawkes is happy. |
OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla chapter 2 . 2/8/2022 Hehehe! Harry Peverell is a cheeky bloke. Exposing Augustus Rookwood's allegiance to Lord Voldemort for the Ministry will put a massive snag in Voldemort's plans. Future knowledge for the win. The Peverell vault is still active, though not surprising it has little Galleons prior to most of their riches transferred to the Potters after the Peverell family's supposed extinction. Charlus Potter is caught off guard by the name Peverell, a name unheard of in many centuries. That makes Harry a distant relative to the Potters in this timeline. |
OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla chapter 1 . 2/8/2022 So Harry Potter changed for the better Post-Deathly Hallows, and he kept the Deathly Hallows as well, opting not to destroy the Elderwand, which is a miracle worker when used for good. In some parts, when you meant to say "scar has faded", you said "fainted". Another part is supposed to say "stunted growth", not "stunned". Outside of spelling errors, this is a solid chapter. I look forward to what changes in the time stream Harry will create with his presence in late 1975 onwards, some years before the First Wizarding War caused by the Dark Lord Voldemort aka Thomas Marvolo Riddle Junior. |
achoputuridze chapter 5 . 2/8/2022 good chapter thanks for double release |
Mupmup123 chapter 5 . 2/8/2022 Amazing |
maximusrexmundi chapter 4 . 2/8/2022 I hope Lestrange challenges him to a duel, always good to have justification when pruning your enemies |