Reviews for Fairborn Adventures
Regtech chapter 34 . 10/7/2023
So what is Harry going to do to keep his friends safe? Why did he react so much when he already knew Tom was in the Castle? If he assumed Tom himself came and didnt react more then welcome the challenge, why would he react so much for a bloody diary?
Regtech chapter 33 . 10/7/2023
Did Harry ever consider to use the map to see who the imperio victim girl went to afterwards?
Regtech chapter 32 . 10/7/2023
This chapter was ridiculous. Harry was willing to risk the bloody elder wand for some classroom drama. Use his bloody connections or get out of school. Him being at the school is a waste of time.

The troop where a learned and older Harry goes through school instead of actually making an active difference is pretty tedious, overused and again, makes no sense. He could just sneak in and out
Regtech chapter 29 . 10/7/2023
The diary is in the castle and Harry left quite som valuable things in chamber. Will he discover the doary first by luck or will he lose some crucial resources to Tom? Harry has had it too easy up until now afterall
Regtech chapter 27 . 10/7/2023
The rope tightens and the teenage drama angst was completely unnecessary. Once again foresight Harry is spot on! He fears for her and we still see no measures to keep her safe.

Watching how tense it is getting is nice tho, but Harry not realizing Marlene saying Voldemort left and right is going to trigger the taboo when it is in place. Why would he even spout the word around like that? Why not make fun of his title? Like "the upstart dark lord" or "the delusional half blood"?
Regtech chapter 26 . 10/7/2023
Secrets shared danger shared. Marlene is now in some serious danger. Harry is now a high profile target for Tom and he should know it. But we javent seen any thoughts on how he will protect those he cares about.

This again one of those moments where does not take time to think. His foresight is horrendous
Regtech chapter 25 . 10/6/2023
This Harry is all over the place. He was "ready" and resolved himself to kill when he went back. Yet spent a long time doing nothing. Kept saying it isnt the time yet, but still manages to gcreate one shit show after another. The only thing he has accomplished is destroying 2 horcruxes and making some allies, but that only made Tom more vary and to probably gide the remaining horcruxes somewhere else.

Any accomplishment he has made was mostky through pure luck or coincidence. Him killing Lucius making Tom lose money was a coincidence.

He went from 25 academic minded to a 15 year old arrogant dick. He was apparently willing to duke it out with the Flamels not caring about the aftermath or probably not even thinking about, as he often has done lately. Not thinking about the repercussions of his actions. Yet going after death eather to kill them is too much.

The problem about these type of MCs is that they can rely on luck however they want. They can screw up as much as they want because their main villain wont act or hit him where it hurts most
Regtech chapter 19 . 10/6/2023
Aaand we not only a physically regressed Harry, but also a mentally regressed Harry to deal with.

He is established to be a learned academic. Did he never consider what would happen if two identical time displaced objects encountered each other? If he wants to be honest, why not promise her the truth when this is all over? He already explained legilimence is a very real threat.

The only reason why the MCs loved ones arent kidnapped for some stupid reason is because a capable villain is too hard for the MC to fight. Tom might be arrogant and such, but given all the setbacks he have encountered. He would jump at any opportunity to learn more about Harry to kill him.
Regtech chapter 18 . 10/6/2023
It had to happen sooner or later. But now that all glows are off, will Harry still dally or actually speed things up?
Regtech chapter 17 . 10/6/2023
Would have been more fun if she just eloped with Harry and them rising far above her fathers house
Regtech chapter 14 . 10/6/2023
Groomed magical girls. Is Andromeda really the only one who dared to run away? This damsel in stress is getting annoying when you have established she is more independent and flexible. Why would she remain when her father is willing to sell her?

Why didnt Harry obliviate them? He was afraid of getting Voldemort attention, would leaving them like this humiliated be worse?
Regtech chapter 10 . 10/6/2023
Harry stated he was ready to kill. Why not make a difference and kill Lucius and the Lestrange family right away? He knows Narcissa is different, so why would he not do so?
Regtech chapter 9 . 10/6/2023
Give the fact you established Marlene as head strong and joined the order. It makes me wonfer how long it takes before she says no or leaves?

Andromeda left her family behind, how many other cases do we have which ended similarly?
Regtech chapter 7 . 10/6/2023
So, how many "slight" mistakes will he make throughout thr story at the most convenient places? To maximize the wow factor?

Juggling that is tricky, but the amount of those moments have been to many in my opinion
Regtech chapter 4 . 10/6/2023
I hope we dont have to read about a both physically AND mentally regressed Harry. How could a 25 year old academically successful and goal oriented thrive around 15 year olds who has their heads far up their arses?
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