this is very cool! i like it alot and cannot wait for another update

Took me two days but I have to say this is very very good I can’t wait to keep reading this story you have done an amazing job!

The first chapter was incredible! I’ll definitely read more and keep up with this story! Great job!

I love this story. its amezing. I hope you Will be able to update it soon

When Paul will arrive?

Dang... poor Harley. Wonder if Solidad somehow tell the Witch Hunters about Ash and May... she obviously can't b'cuz she'd be killed in an instant but I wonder...

Anyway, thanks for this chapter!

So far, so good. I’m loving it! This chapter felt like it’s right on point and that Ash saved May and had to kill his ally for her. Great job as always! Ima read your other story shortly:)

Finally managed to catch up and let me tell you that I love this story just as much as your other current one! I just want to thank you for not only writing great Advance stories, but also for updating them and not abandoning them. You take me on such emotional roller-coasters that it makes me want to keep reading. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for being awesome. :)

I finally catch up to this amazing story and I meet with nothing but a massive cliffhangerI wonder what is going to happen next hmm... hope Ash saves her ahhh
Thanks for making this fic! I really enjoyed it!

Cool Start, this is a perfectly unique fanfic, keep up the great work and stay safe!

The train of (mostly) silent readers stops here! Wanted to catch up to the latest chapter to leave my thoughts, and boy am I glad I did. I always tell myself that with fics involving school life, it's gotta have something deeperit can't just be the day-to-day. This story is doing an excellent job of having a captivating version of that "something," it's been an extremely entertaining read so far. I haven't had the opportunity to read too many magic-based stories of this caliber, might be a bit of a standard setter. Well written, carefully planned, full of intrigue, and a unique premiseall part of a recipe for success, and I'm on board. Excited to see more!

Ohh, I see this story is getting better and better from the way this chapter is written. I loved how you described the details about the witches when the others were looking them up. I even had to look up a few words so I can understand and take my time reading every part of this chapter.

And oh that Harley, I can see how much of an antagonist he was in this chapter. Grr. I hope Ash could save May somehow or at least get saved cuz I wouldn't want May to get stabbed. It keeps me in suspense for the next chapter.

You're doing a great job as always!:) I'm sure you'll get more readers and reviews as this story progresses, you're that amazing

I'm happy to see another chapter posted here a 2 days after you posted the last two:) I think you did well what you needed to do to include the seven minutes in heaven. It sets up nicely for Ash and May as I loved the later part where they were in bed together. I could feel they are getting closer and closer, especially with May's feelings conflicting towards him, with her knowing that the she knew he meant to kill her. You did a fine job at this story cuz I'm loving it:) ttyl

That was big revelation about Ash, tho I sort of saw that one coming when Ash said that May should be dead, got me thinking there's more to him(Even though I knew this already from our talk before haha), so this was a pretty good chapter here honestly.

And I enjoyed this chapter especially with Dawn caring for May as best friends and being frisky with another woman haha

I'm so glad Ash saved May from being freeze to death. I was worried for her, so I'm glad Ash came to the rescue in this chapter:)