i wish you would continue this the cliffhanger is killing me

Awww, that's hust cruel leaving it on a cliffhanger like that. I so wanted to see just how much she'd completely screw Piggot over.

Wow, excellent Worm story and so true to the tone of the original, ie everyone held the 'idiot ball' at just the right time to make things worse!

Thanks for posting, might there be a sequel in the future?

This is awesome.
Why is there no chapter 2?

This was an awesome story! Any chance you feel like making a second chapter to finish it up?

Great story, it is obviously intended as a one shot but it also obviously deserves more. One or two more chapters wouldn't take away from the story but add to it. Please tie up the loose ends. There is enough plot points and untouched parts that would easily make up the ground work.

Hell, even getting taylor a small team would be a great chapter on its own (although not Shatterbird. I do not like that route, if Jack Slash can not make her give up her principles, Shatterbird shouldn't have a snowballs chance in hell of even being tolerated) I am eagerly waiting for the new chapter.

Ok like everyone was out of character

Great, a 20k chap

Unless there’s a new chapter where the collective prt and protectorate get their asses handed to them I am going to be very disappointed.

will you continue this?

My problem is, I can see all too easily how irl agencies do this same sort of stuff to fit their own ends... darn good story, even if it was only one chapter. Darn good.

Gah .. good for start middle and almost the end .. endings like this suck .. hopefully some day a continuation will happen. Thank you tho for the story it was interesting .. Its like watching an awesome pilot for a tv series and finding out they didn't do any more of it.

I enjoyed this story. There were details that I didn't think were realistic enough for the setting and that broke my immersion but overall the writing was good enough and Taylor was creative enough that I enjoyed it and was okay with those details. That said I will give what I saw in general were the good and the bad points of this fanfiction. Good point one was the way Taylor's power manifested, it made sense as a way for her not to get sensory overload from the get go. Bad point was how fast she comes her power. From only being able to control ants to - seemingly everything in a matter of, I believe it was minutes when she realized was immersing breaking. The way the wards treated her was ridiculous in that they were so antagonistic. The way Vista acted was nice in that this was one of the rare stories I have seen that has actually acknowledge that she isn't perfectly mature and that wanting to be seen as so responsible when she was only 13 shows just why no one saw her as responsible. I like the action of the plot, I see area's where things were sort of ... twisted to work just because. Coil not taking more note of Taylor, the fact that Taylor didn't drop our of school when she left the wards since homeschooling is an option, the inability for trained mercs to be able to take one man who is head of hiring if I remember correctly for a dock workers Union. Really the story is not bad, a few words added or a scene reworked a little so that it isn't just people being horrible but some unfortunate circumstances, perhaps showing one or two instances where Taylor was slightly at fault but doesn't see it. A good example of this would have Coil being distracted with something else so that he dones't pay attention to Taylor until it is too late. I'll be honest the way he was dealt with works perfectly fine with me, Taylor's range is big enough I can see it being plausible. Overall I love the ending where she is undecided on what to do, it's very Taylor. Thought I hope you take my advice, it would be problematic having her as the victim if she indeed does decide to go villain.
P.S. I actually think you got Pancea written pretty in character. For the few times I've read her scenes or from her view she didn't come of as a kind or sympathetic (to me) person. She came of as undersandable, in that she had thought decisions to make but as an actually reasonable person ... no, threatening to give someone cancer like she did in Worm is the sign of a serious mental health problems.
Good work. Good Perosn test.

Please you can’t leave it at that. I NEED MORE.

I both love and hate stories that end like this.

Love them because it's an ending that works, closing the current chapter of Taylor's life, and it's a hell of a lot better than the 99% of stories that just get abandoned.

But hate it because this was fantastic and I want more.

Thanks for the story!