Awe…i wanted to see Taylor get past Pigot and the protectorate and get her money.

I like how you shook this snow globe up. And instead of having people be complete idiots, they just made the wrong decisions at precise moments.

It's like they all tried to talk to Taylor and failed the Q-T-E every time.

I really like that, from a reader's perspective. A lot of fics have people befriend panacea for free heals, This Taylor had one bad encounter, and they're enemies for life. And it's realistic! (as much as worm allows)

It's nice to see things NOT work out for the protagonist and see how that changes them.

Like other readers, I hope she doesn't go criminal. That would be a partial win for newly-headless-jack.

A brilliant story that I hope to see more of.

Wow!

Nice.
Maybe there's something wrong with me, but I didn't have the anger reaction that one commentator on the Caer Azkaban group did. This seemed a Worm story to me, with the really screwed up Worm world similar to how it's portrayed in the original story.

One thing I liked about the original, and this, is that Taylor is always going up against something stronger than her, and coming through because she uses her brain. You did a good job with that.

Thanks for the story.

Tom A.

I loved this all the way up to this awful cliffhanger you just left us on. I'd be fine if it wasn't marked 'complete.' A cliffhanger like this is brutal

Well, that was a gut punch. It just kept escalating, only it was a race to the bottom. Reminds me a bit of Implacable on SB, with the PRT's control freak tendencies taken to extremes and they keep doubling down on the stupid choices.

I think normally the response to a one shot that ends like that is a demand for more, but I think the works pretty well as a self contained story. I still want more, but I feel like if we never got more that would be ok too.

Bureaucratic persecution. Taylor is just trying to get along, but they (various forms thereof) just keep pushing. This Piggot just needs killing. Getting out from under SH9 when two of them are in your living room was great. Listed as complete, but it would be nice to see Taylor be able to build something for herself.

When they manage to make 'remaking the nine' look like a proper option, you know bureaucracy has reached a new low

An epic of a one-shot, but I'll cross my fingers that inspiration strikes and we get a second chapter! I would love to see a follow up to this where people have to eat some real crow, though I hope that Taylor does take down Shatterbird instead of recruiting her.

EXCELLENT
MERCI POUR LA LECTURE

Well damn, liked the story. It's listed as complete so I'm guessing it's a one shot? with Jackson working in the background it shows hope for the bounty's at least. Left it open ended but considering the terrible way everyone seems to treat her I don't hold out to much hope.

Vicky and Amy's treatment of her is hilariously awful, what do they think the endbringer truce is? I guess new wave are all villains too.

Wow, that was a ride.

Loooove your characterisation of Taylor, but hate this whole thing with Glory. I know it's almost a meme, but it's such a tired way to write her.

so cool