WTF is a Scotsman accent? Do you mean a Scottish accent? You really need to carefully re-read your chapters several times to make sure they make sense grammatically

Oh so Harry is a whimpering pussy now and none of the 'good guys' have the stones to actually do something about malfoy and all the other evil cunts attacking their children?

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

Ignore the haters. Haters gonna hate. Keep writing and I hope you update soon!

This is great, hope to see an update soon.

Thanks for your writings so far. Again I draw attention to sentences which are missing prepositions or other necessary words, e.g. the term St Mungo's being missed in a few places.
Being now Jan 2024 it's a little over 4 months since the last update. I hope you've not totally abandoned this effort as I look forward to seeing where it leads.

Um, Happy New Year mucker.
Ciao.

Two corrections if I may. The rank of 'Private First Class' is exclusive to the American military and not used in Europe. 'Private', Lance-Corporal, Sergeant, Sergeant Major, etc. being the British military ranks. Secondly, could you stop writing 'form' every time the context requires 'from' to be used. Check a dictionary please. The meanings are distinctly different.
I also see that you updated your scribbles recently, but somehow you missed out on numerous missing prepositions and contextually needed phrases. I reference Umbitch being scolded by McGonagall as an example.
Perhaps Grammar as well as Spell checking should be used prior to uploading?
Ciao.

For fucks sake use a DICTIONARY dipstick.
There's a vast linguistic difference between WEARY and the word that you should have used, WARY.
You also sometimes make basic errors such as the abbreviation for THEY ARE, which is THEY'RE, absolutely not THEIR.
Any time you aren't 100% sure, DO NOT USE ABBREVIATIONS. Play safe.
There is equally a vast difference between LOSE and LOOSE. Once again I recommend a dictionary. Also the past tense of SLAY is SLEW, not 'slayed' an abomination of a word - e.g. HP 'slew the basilisk', not that abomination.
Rant over for now. Thanks for your interesting variation upon a theme.
Ciao.

Snape's a right bitch, yeah

That’s a really good story. I just read the 36 chapters in the plane.

I hope it’s not abandonned.

Just a pointI was a bit confused when Harry met Ragnok as he says he destroyed two horcruxes when it’s threediary, locket and ring.
Or did I missed something ?

Honestly, this fanfic interests me more than a fanfic where a very reclusive thirteen-year-old suddenly got himself two girlfriends, talking about MILF and breast size. It creeps me out. I guess time really does change a lot of things

I like this, the best part, was you had Harry take directions from the older students, and not come up with the plan are by himself, that doesn’t happen in many stories

Interesting chapters...looking for more

You’ve made it obvious that Harry has infuriated Warrington with this “deal” aka bullying. I don’t understand how they benefit by enraging an enemy like this rather than carrot & stick (paying a fair price and forcing it with the info). They look like people who don’t deal fairly which makes everyone cautious and look twice. I have come back to the story so this might all be explained previously- but if enraging an enemy is the point, surely it could be mentioned in this chapter? Otherwise Harry has made an obvious political mistake that his mentor right there might point out. Even if it’s as low level as don’t make your emotions so obvious.

The reviews are definitely keeping me from reading this story. Not to mention, you seem to have tried to make visual changes to characters that are cemented already as looking a certain way in most everyone's mind from the original stories and movies. You're never gonna win against the highly popular already established character visualization it will just grate on people's senses more and more throughout the story as they read about the change that just won't match what is already in their minds eye. Not to mention stupid and lazy people, both real and fake are not worth wasting time on.