| Reviews for Harry Potter: The Rise |
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   Onsidefall chapter 13 . 3/9/2022 leave it the way it is, Don't back track now the story is good as it is now. |
| Vedros chapter 12 . 3/9/2022 Ryan Fraser? Bro, you a Newcastle fan? |
| Deal With Itt chapter 12 . 3/9/2022 ben? is that supposed to be ted |
| NazgulBelserion chapter 7 . 3/9/2022 Oh God were doing this Cringy ass Goblin speak nonsense I've read one story where MC is self insert and he ask Ted Tonks about this and Ted laughed he's ass off and no speaking about Killing and Gold will not make goblins like you. |
| CaskettFan5 chapter 12 . 3/9/2022 So Ben instead of Ted, a little more AU. This seems like a chapter where you just got things out of the way for later. Not much happens although hopefully Harry learned a little humility from his 'adventure'. I forgot to mention earlier, nice reference to LOTR. |
| mwinter1 chapter 12 . 3/9/2022 Awaiting more. |
| true blood prince chapter 12 . 3/9/2022 Arsenal FC for the win! COYG love the story btw |
| LeightonWD chapter 11 . 3/8/2022 Just started reading great work! |
| Pixie Duck chapter 1 . 3/6/2022 While there will be mutual attraction between the two, Harry and Hermione won't be the endgame couple Good thing that you put some warning. I didn't notice Hermione in the tags first. Now I can skip the fic knowing that she will be an important character. Why the hell writers feel the need to force her in every single story, let a lone as brief love interest for Harry I have no idea. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/4/2022 Harry wasn't born when Regulus died so how can he mention him in his letter. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/3/2022 Your Salazar doesn't talk like a 1000 year old wizard with the knowledge of that age. How should they know something like Vitamin? |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/3/2022 The temporal structure of this chapter is a mess. I consider most flashbacks as patches to a failed story structure. Using them for no good reason at all because you think it's a "good style" is really misguided. Avoid them like the plague. |
| grechri chapter 11 . 3/5/2022 Amazing story. I love Daphne so far. And Harry is cool. Very believable in his progression. |
| Hellrune chapter 8 . 3/4/2022 I really like the story so far. The characterization is good and plotting is good so far. The thing that takes me out of it every time is when Harry swears. A 12 year old in the 90's, especially a quiet repressed one like Harry, didn't talk like that and it just brings me out of the story. |
| Vu1kan18 chapter 11 . 3/3/2022 Loving the fic keep going please |