Reviews for Harry Potter: The Rise
N7SPARTAN-Commander-Jay117 chapter 6 . 3/3/2022
Harry should get together with Hermione and Daphne more if he has the Potter and Black name to continue.
N7SPARTAN-Commander-Jay117 chapter 4 . 3/3/2022
A Contract for Daphne would probably work better and be funny-er.
Anon chapter 11 . 3/1/2022
Solid story. Shows great potential
Guest chapter 11 . 2/28/2022
Hopefully with emancipation done Harry can get some obscure or ancient books from his family vault or Black family home. Some of his brash attitude needs to be controlled as well (he babbled all his plans on station). Confidence is good but this is arrogance and over confidence. Harry can’t outsmart Dark faction (Malfoy and company) and Light (Dumbledore) everytime if they start considering Harry major
player (not just pawn)
MystPointo2355 chapter 11 . 3/2/2022
I would appreciate a Gyrfalcon as the animagus form but that's just my opinion.

I love the story BTW.
boredasf13 chapter 8 . 3/2/2022
ooc goblins? it's very hard to see goblins so free with information and knowing Sirius enough to call him by name Or have such details on them... it's a little to hard to swallow you know... it's gives the feeling of those fics where next the Goblins will heal harry and train him and give him mithril
Geovanni Luciano chapter 11 . 3/1/2022
Your ending point leaves a nice cliffhanger. Queue the new wand. What will it be? Are you going to totally trope out with two kinds of wood, 12 core materials, and a focus gem stone like so many others or are you perhaps going to create a match for the Death Stick? Looking forward to your next update.
PurpleElement chapter 11 . 3/1/2022
I'm enjoying this fic, I'd like to vote for a bird animagus, any that eat meat. Or give a negative vote for felines.
CaskettFan5 chapter 11 . 2/28/2022
Learning from one of Voldemort's most feared DEs, how Slytherin of Harry. I like how you wrote the twins this chapter.
CCR24 chapter 11 . 2/28/2022
A panther animagus is better
iiNeo chapter 11 . 2/28/2022
This is pretty fucking dumb harry didn't even open the books to see if their actually worth the money. He took a shady guys words and didn't even check anything himself like a normal person would... And imitating a Death eaters style of dueling? Great. Go ahead and alienate everyone who will recognize it, many including the Auror corps...
Sunny JS chapter 11 . 2/28/2022
I do like the story premises where Harry is mentored by Salazar and I'm grateful that you, as an author, are consistent in your uploads. I'm also glad that you are introducing the Tonks family early, as l hope that Andi become somewhat a mother figure for Harry if Sirius is to be 'like' his father. Thanks again Author for your work.

P.S. How long do you expect your story to be and do you have any plans for any other stories?
Gladiusx chapter 1 . 2/28/2022
A very nice setup this chapter. Cheers , thanks for the chapter and keep it up!
mwinter1 chapter 11 . 2/28/2022
And yet i was expecting to see Andromeda in this Chapter. Awaiting more.
Lord Shiva chapter 10 . 2/27/2022
If that contract gets applied to Harry, I'll call bullshit. Malfoy has no right to make a contract that binds Harry to it, otherwise, anyone can do that to just about anyone.
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