can u like speed up the story a little bit, there is just too much dialog and not much progression

I like your take on Goblins, and how you are not making Harry OPed at all. Harry is strong in magic and is learning from one of the founders. I also find how you are making harry honorable which very few writers even think about. I can't wait for you to continue, so thank you for the latest installment and keep it up to see you in the next chapter.

Freaking great so far and I like how you introduced Daphne and Tracey.

Do not add Granger to the being a couple, she is like his sister and she acts that way too. Just wrong just like Ginny is wrong.

I think you should make one clarification: you mentioned purification ritual to get rid of anomalies. Did that mean removal of horcrux in scar as well?

Harry & Hermione shares very platonic relation so don’t turn that into romance.

Well Serius is coming in picture soon. So after some healing may Serious can have Hermione two polar opposite personality (like Lily and James) ; age difference shouldn’t be issue in wizarding world and he is still lot better option than Ron.

Since house potter has given good enough status Harry can easily pass heir black status to Sirius’s children when time comes.

hope to read more.

Honestly, since Harry is a bit of a damage individual in this fic due to his treatment from the Dursleys, I'd say just have him with Daphne. Harry is going to have difficulty going out with one girl, let alone two. It'll also be harder to write a threesome relationship as well. Usually, it ends up with the guy in two relationships with two girls and the relationship between the girls is pretty much not happening or being very minimal.

Honestly, if you are going with a more damaged Harry, as a result of his treatment by the Durlseys, then I think it makes the most sense for him to be only with one girl.

And here comes the House of Black! I had wondered why Daphne seemed so annoyed. It is logical and predictable, I had hoped for some sort of twist on why she'd be so annoyed. On the other hand, it shouldn't be hard to overcome, she just has to get to know the real Harry or learn more of his story. However, how you'll make that happen is one of the things I will have to look forward to. I also liked how you had Slytherin dissect Harry's attitude, which should break him out of his canon wish to be 'just Harry'.

Don't worry about your posting schedule. I have broken mine beyond repair and I'm not sure when I'll get things going again. Fanfiction is fun but it isn't part of real life.

Thanks for the chapter.
Slytherin is right when he described the real reasons of Harry's behavior.

Salazar Slytherin was a *WHAT*? (My surprise is on the order of "Why not?" Consider this fact - Lord Voldemort was not even a half-blood - he was the child of a Squib and a MUggle; Merope Gaunt was the Squib - while Tom Riddle Senior was a Potioned Muggle - Gaunt made the potion herself - despite being a Squib, she was a crack potion brewer.) If both those facts got out, it would be a monstrous shakeup.)

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Since you asked...I'd say avoid the multiple pairing. No matter how well written it always reads to any mature woman like a 12 year old boys sex fantasy at which point its just irritating and brings nothing to the table. Quidditch scene was fine, but a wee bit too long IMHO, because, really how much can the games all differ from the books?