|Reviews for Changed Leaf|
| Skyegrave chapter 4 . 1/10
Aaah, the age old 'Suddenly, Ninjas!' tool.
Hadn't seen it in a while.
| Quis Custodiet chapter 1 . 5/9/2016
Don't think you are updating this story, but for future reference:
Japanese don't have middle names.
Haruka is Keitaro's cousin, not his aunt. Keitaro calls her Obasan in the manga, which is a double entendre because Hina adopted her making him both his (Aunt) as well as an "Older Lady". The later meaning of the word is probably why Haruka hits him when he says it.
Cousin # $ is legal in japan actually, so this might have made your story better - at least it wouldn't actually be incest. Still, its kind of frowned on, but it still happens. A recent former Japanese PM was actually married to his cousin.
Sarah's mom's name is actually Julia, not Jessica.
Japanese don't tip and most Japanese will be confused or refuse one. The only exception is an old custom if you stay at an inn, and then you need to wrap it in paper or in an envelope. I've made this mistake in my own story once :)
I doubt doing exercise would make a 20 year old man grow almost 2 inches in 2 years. hehe.
Your grading thing is messed up. 1.0 is a bad score, 4.0 is a good score. Also Japan doesn't use that system, they use a 4 tier grade system (A,B,C,D) or Yu, Ryo, Ka, Fuka with Fuka being a fail. So even if you converted to a grade point system, 1 would basically be a failure, percentage wise the cutoff for that is 60%. Also, GPA isn't a considerable metric in Japan. Usually when people ask/want to know how you are doing, they'll ask you what your class rank is. So if you said, "third in class" and you went to Todai, then people would be all like "Holy shit this guy is smart."
Good luck with whatever you write in the future!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
sinungaling. akala ko mag-uupdate ka! pero 2007 pa yung last update mo
| Kiyomaro-kun chapter 4 . 12/18/2011
are you going to update this story'
| Samhan chapter 4 . 8/3/2010
I like it, please continue
| Silber D. Wolf chapter 4 . 2/9/2010
| I'm Solo chapter 4 . 12/26/2009
hey hey wheres a new update? it's been quite the while since the last one and this is a good story that to my sadness has just ground to a halt...please update
| Taium the Fire Paladin chapter 4 . 5/29/2009
I really hope you come back and continue this fic. It's just getting good and boom, nothing for 2 years. Please dude, I love this fic, and wanna see it get the continuation it deserves.
| ken chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
theis story is fuck up
| nightwing27 chapter 4 . 9/20/2008
wow good chapter
| nightwing27 chapter 3 . 9/20/2008
| nightwing27 chapter 2 . 9/20/2008
| nightwing27 chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
| t-dugong chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
I thought a mark of 4.0 is the highest in GPA scoring system?
| George Mathew chapter 4 . 7/6/2008
This is A GRET STORY UPDATE IT SON WHATS TAKIN U SO LONG. ONES STARTED U SHOULD END IT AS WELL.