Reviews for A Spire to the Stars |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and enjoyed it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No waaayyyy. All along it was her ?! But what does that mean then ? Yooooo this is too much lol. Also, i really liked how even Kronos walks the path of Fate and talks about it with Percy, it was really cool. And the way you went about concluding this fight or really this war, made sense and was greeaaat |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah considering the theme on let Anaabeth kill him in canon Luke doing a kill her kill himself feels... too... Percy makes really dumb decisions on all duty all the time and is now rewarded for it so? Dunno. Feels very... Murder the Straights? is that the vibe im getting here? hmm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Fudge you Titan muahaha I love it when they call him Godling |
![]() ![]() Flow and pacing of this fic so far are off enough for me to take notice. It has actively taken me out of the reading |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was so HYPEEEEEEE. Loved it and love your work. Cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh My Word! What a hype chapter. That was crazy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Stunning stuff, stirring, too! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thats easily one of the best Hyperios fights Ive ever read. I wanted to comment last chapter but then you dropped this... Ive read entire story without realising that you are the author of Cadmean Victory. Holy shit my man, your writing has improved tremendously! I remember that In Cadmean your characters were a lil bit without emotions? A bit of bland maybe? Im not sure, but something was wrong with them, and though the story was great I remember that not sitting with me well. Now here... This story, and especially its second half are almost poethic! Its truly amazing to read and your portrayal of Percy/Zoe is sooo unique and interesting to read. I love your development of characters. Percy changing thanks to Zoe. Different relationship with Annabeth, Clarisse and Thalia. Iphigenia is a very nice addition. Calypso episode was heartwrenching and made me cry like a baby lol. Heck even Ethan was great and his was truly a 'beautiful death'. This newest chapter was absolutely amazing. The best part is that Im not sure whatever ending you are going to choose. There is so much possibilities. Cant wait for next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Annabeth is wrong , Prometheus give them a terrible gift |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very good chapter, keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love your writing style. I’d check out your other stuff but I’m not a fan of Harry Potter. Keep up the great work. The fight between Percy and Hyperion was awesome. And the dialogue was great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know if you're a borderlands fan, but I am and the first thought I had after seeing the word elpis was borderlands. Because the moon of the planet Pandora in that series is called Elpis. Plus I just learned that Elpis was the last thing left in Pandoras box after it was opened. But you obviously knew that, sorry about the rambling. Just wanted to say awesome chapter and id love to see Sally and Paul reacting to Poseidon showing up with a shark tank for Percy. |