Reviews for Archangel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I found this on google sucks you gave up on it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Has this been canceled, or are you no longer writing it? I am genuinely very curious about the story. I think it is on par with Marvel's Maelstrom by Pibbinator, and I think it would surpass it if it had more chapters. Here are a few things I really like: I thoroughly enjoy how you treat Naruto in this story. You don't treat him like he's a replacement for any character or any motive; you actually treat him like a functioning character. You have him take an active role without hindering the growth of the other characters. For instance, Felicia HardyI don't really know much about her original backstory or what turned her into the Black Catbut the way you handled their relationship is amazing. You built it up, only for it to come crashing down in a very human way. When you're hurt or sad, sometimes people have a tendency to become, for lack of a better word, a leech. They use those around them like crutches because they’re so broken. Sometimes they drain the vitality out of their friends because the friends are seeing them at their worst, and that sometimes brings their friends down. I love how in no way has Naruto been shown to hate Felicia. It kind of reminds me of Master Oogway with the whole Tai Lung thing. He knew that he wasn’t going to play a pivotal part in her revenge because he didn’t believe that was best for her. But he wasn’t going to preach his own morals onto her like he used to because he knew she had to figure it out the hard way. He didn’t try to stop her because he knew he couldn’t, and I think that’s a brilliant way of utilizing Naruto. There’s also the way you handle how Naruto uses his powers. While being rusty and not using his more advanced attacks, Naruto was still able to go toe-to-toe with Captain America. Naruto joins different groups or participates in different things because he’s Naruto. He probably would realistically get bored with a mundane life, but realistically, I don’t think he would want to pledge his allegiance to anythingwhich I also like. You're able to show that he’s matured as a human being without relying on flashbacks, but you’re also able to show that he’s changed as a person. His core beliefs are the same, but how he reaches them is what’s different. For instance, with his conversation with Death, Death notes that he would want to master the abilities he’s gained from her because he kind of lives by the motto Never back down, never quit. Another thing I really appreciate about your story is how you didn’t limit yourself. It feels like a proper blend between the movies and the comics, and I think having him appear after the 5-year snap was the best course of action. Now, while this is one of my favorite stories on this site and on fanfiction sites in general (top three), there’s one crucial thing that I really dislike. At some point, it reads kind of like watching a YouTube timeline. I don’t know if it’s because the chapters are short or because I’ve read the story so many times, but there are moments that kind of just feel brushed past. Like I mentioned before, the Felicia and Naruto moment where she walks out is kind of never brought up again. It’s brought up when he sees her on television, which I do likehow she holds some remorse, but she’s not all self-pity, woe is me. She understands what she did and that it made her who she is today, but she can still feel bad. She can still sometimes live in the what ifs, but I wish his actions were talked about more. I think that’s where you were going to head with your story, but if you canceled it, that would be really sad because we would never see that payoff. It almost feels like it ended on a cliffhanger. Anyway, please do tell us: Are you planning on continuing this story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() genial historia espero puedes integrar a pietro |
![]() ![]() Quien diablos es felicia, una pregunta antes de continuar estás haciendo está historia basada en los cómics o las películas necesito una respuesta para ver si continuo o no gracias |
![]() ![]() ![]() eh, Naruto should pretty much walk through captain america. Steve is way above normal Earth humans. But Naruto humans all have some level of chakra. Naruto, without even trying later in the series would be actually superhuman, rather than Steve's peak human levels. And he's not some untrained newbie. Feels like you're trying too hard there. |
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![]() ![]() I this is a couple of years old but still it has to be one of the best Naruto crossovers. He doesn’t search for power or women, he just does his own thing and if something comes up he will help out. Just Naruto living his life really without all the struggles/ hate. Bravo to you for not making it cliché |
![]() ![]() What a useless paper naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soooo any chance this story will get a new chapter? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this on hiatus because the author has not updated in a while and it's a really good fanfiction |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh no not the Torento! cringe ass english Japanese Justu names |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue with the story, it's very good, please don't give up, a story that really has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a big fan of this type of story and the truth is that they have no comparison. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So please please update |