This story is so, so good! I absolutely love the Clint and Loki friendship content. I also love your characterization of everyone so much and getting to see how much they care about each other. So excited to see where this goes!

I liked this chap. What more is there to say? Anyway, keep up the great work! 3

“He just wants to find his brother, kill him, and then go home.” I feel you Loki. I feel you.

Poor Loki. And now his parents are coming? That can't end up well. I can't wait to see what happens next!

IM LITERALLY DYINGG THIS IS SO COOL! THE MOMENT WHEN THE HAMMER WENT PAST THOR AND TO LOKI? I LITERALLY SCREAMED! This chapter was amazing thanks so much! Keep up the good work!

Asgard's coming...not sure how I feel about that, but as always the chapter was INTENSE and I was kept on the edge of my seat the entire time. Poor everyone, you can see how worn down they all are.

This seems like how Jane and Darcy would handle something like this. Perhaps Thor did this to lure the Avengers and Loki there?

Loki thinking he wasn't tortured by the Chitauri. That's makes sense because if the Mind stone was corrupting him and twisting his perception, plus Thanos not wanting Loki to appear coerced...

Had to laugh about Loki not knowing what dogs were.

The fight with Thor and Loki getting so close yet so far from reaching him.

Loki having Mjolnir. Yes! He earned it

Only five hours. Wasn't expecting that one.

Asgard knows. Oh boy. This is going to be interesting

Also, it makes sense that the Mind stone makes the victim love the captor. That's why it goes through the heart to the mind

So many surprises! I’ll be honest, I was crushed by the news of Thor, poor Selvig! How will Thor get out of this mess?! And it turns out that Clint is giving off nightmare radiation too (love that term haha). Great chapter!

Hi, this is Dream Plane from DroidePlane (my name when I’m logged in)! Wow, the confrontation was a surprise. I thought Clint is the only one being affected, but apparently not. Odin is a jerk though! Saying that thousands were killed when that wasn’t the case? So cruel. Glad that it got cleared up!

I love so much how all of them are together. They're all broken and they really are trying their hardest just to take care of each other and be a family. The scene with Clint and Bruce was so good. It was just so raw. And the details about Steve splurging on art supplies and Nat trying to convince him to spend the money for the markers he actually wanted - and the fact that he needed convincing to do it! I do the same thing, but I'd never really thought about it before. It's weird to think of needing permission to buy a thing you want - a good thing, a thing you can afford and would use. It was an endearing thing to see between them - and it makes a lot of sense, character-wise. Steve's not used to having money. And Nat's character here is so sweet. The fact that she wants family, and family is the only thing she doesn't think she can have is heartbreaking, and so true to her character. I loved the little nose-flick she gives Loki, and how when she calls him family she does it in Russian.

The whole interaction with Sif and the Warriors was inspired, too. I loved how mad Tony was with Loki after. And I love the fact that they don't get along with Thor's previous friend group. Clint's inability to correctly name them was as entertaining as it was honest. I can't tell you how many times I've done the same thing X)

My favorite line may have been the part where Clint was saying he could write a book about bows. It would be 400 pages and mostly filled with puns. I laughed out loud.

But DUDE, that last segment. The plot kicked in HARD. I do NOT want the guys to have to deal with this right now, but at the same time, I desperately want to know how they're going to get out of this X] The suspense is wonderful. And the dreams go both ways now?! I had a hunch it might be what was happening. I was delighted to see I was right, but at the same time, i have NO guess what it means.

You write with such an emotional sensitivity, it gives the characters a real vulnerability that makes them so much more relatable and profoundly ups the drama. I can't imagine having to deal with them getting hurt anymore, but I don't see how it can be avoided. As a reader, it puts me in a delicious kind of suspense that I don't see too terribly often.

Much as I want to see whatever unfolds next, take whatever time you need. For whatever it's worth, you have people out here who are rooting for you.

OH MY GOSHHH MY HEART HOW COUULD YOU DO THIS ITS SO GOODD! THE ANGSTTT I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! Great writing!

Amazing job on this chapter!
I really liked the part where clint talked to bruce about loki's mind leeking into his, and clint acted really nonchalant about it, which I personally always love. For the next chapter, im predicting that they are going to actually start talking abou their minds leeking into eachother, and figuring out who is the mastermind. I think its Thanos, but i could be wrong.

“Clint’s entire muscular system has decided to fire half its staff,” Believe me when I say I laughed so hard at that.

Oh yeah, I guess we won't get to know if Selvig was having memory/nightmares. Though I'm guessing he was. Oh gosh, Thor, umm...yeah.

"Loki's big, stupid brain put two and two together and came up with self-sacrifice." Sounds about right. I absolutely loved Nat defending/calling Loki out. His surprise at someone besides Thor protecting him was very Loki-like.

"...so stop trying to get yourself killed..." Yes! Please, Loki, just STOP DYING!

"Just because he has intelligence markers likely off of whatever charts Asgard uses does not mean he has the wisdom to use it without getting himself killed."

The lines about Heimdall made perfect sense. Yes, he can see everything. That doesn't mean he is watching everything at once.

Mortal really is quite a basic word.

I was sooo confused when Thor came. I cannot believe I fell for that.

Even though it's been kinda silently agreed on by now, I still loved it when Nat called Loki family.

Gamora and Nebula. I had forgotten how ruthless and merciless they were before Guardians of the Galaxy.

"If Loki was being influenced by the scepter, then who was pulling his strings?" Yep. That would be correct, Clint. There's something much, much worse.

I loved Clint's reaction to bow an arrows being a human invention.

That nightmare about Barney... Yikes. The fact that Loki dreamed it, he and Clint need to talk. Can't wait for the next chapter!