This story was rather interesting at the start but in the last couple chapters it feels like Harry has been demoted to plot device rather than a character.

so far this story is soo good! i wish for 500k more words! thank you for writing this!

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Denied rightful smut!
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The story was doing pretty well until chapter 5 when it suddenly decided to go off the rails with some BS nonsense and the whole story went to shit. Honestly not surprised it got dropped, writer would basically need to delete ch. 5 and ch. 6 and start again from ch. 4 to be able to continue.

Unentertaining trash, Potter is a pathetic beta bitch doormat loser, this whole story needs to be deleted its not surprising at all it got dropped.

Ahh, and unfortunately we were doing so well and then Potter got turned into to a pathetic little beta bitch as per usual despite the fact that he is supposed to be a badass and not a pathetic loser doormat. Can't say I'm surprised though, only disappointed, many many writers seem to enjoy making Harry pathetic trash that no one sane and/or with a functioning brain would enjoy reading about.

This story is a lot of fun and very interesting, I really only have two complaints, one I wish it was exclusively Harry/Ahsoka, and two, it hasn't updated in a but. Overall I'm enjoying it, and can't wait to read more.

Enjoyed your story and look forward to reading more

Hay can you please pick this story up again please it's really good

I can only hope this gets picked up again as it is good even though this chapter was kind of boring. Honestly don't like how Shaak Ti is pregnant since pregnancy has a great effect of slowing fics down and making them worse.

I hope if this does return they find a way to make Harry mortal as an immortal protagonist isn't the best thing to read as there is no threat. There is also the fact that he is fundamentally broken and watching more oeople he loves wither and die will break him more. He would be craving death.

This has so many similarities to "I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For" by kathryn518 .

I'm a little offput by how quickly Ahsoka became so crude but nothing deal breaking.

It says theirs 15 chapters in your Authors not but seeing as there hasn't been a update in 2 years I assume the other chapters will never be posted.

Please continue writing this wonderful story. Chapter 6 is starting to really make this story your own, and I'm really looking forward to where you're going to take it. Hopefully you'll post another chapter soon. Keep up the good work! Dambow1974

Ahhh sad this story hasn’t continues :( not enough like it out there!

Could've saved her easily. She "thought" she saw her die and told him so. That's it.

So if she couldn't sense it he just had to save her and hit her with a compulsion or used an illusion for her to see that again.

If she could then instead he simply saves her and telling her the issue modifies her memory to what she experienced temporarily so the same event happens leading to the save. Afterward he restores her memory of Barriss surviving and being saved so it all lines up.

Simple fix for him that's actually strange he wouldn't come up with sense aside from the memory mod which he for sure learned after a long long life he already did in this chapter. Compulsions and illusions.