Reviews for The Battles Within
Hadeen chapter 6 . 10/19
A great story full of interesting characters. Harry comes across as bot only old and tired but disconnected and numb to it all. The Jedi around him all follow familiar fix stereo types though Shaak TI's Change felt very abrupt and rushed. Of course the 180 she does makes more sense with this rushing things.
A good story thank you.
monkeywrench542 chapter 6 . 10/17
I really love the storyline, please let your readers know that you plan to continue on this story.

Guest chapter 6 . 10/3
Incredible story with great depth and originality.
Thank you for a wonderful tale.
Lukoshi chapter 6 . 9/30
This has been pretty enjoyable, really hoping that our author decides to finish up the remaining 9 chapters or so one day. Followed and favourited incase they ever do!
Fredward1 chapter 4 . 9/22
You wrote harry sooo cringy this chapter
LordRachakonda chapter 6 . 9/12
will this fic continue?
ALPHA02FURY97 chapter 6 . 9/11
wow this is really good please update!
asdasd chapter 6 . 9/2
Amazing story. Hope you continue this. Thanks!
asdasd chapter 3 . 9/2
this is simply great. Shame it is propably discontinued but I'l bookmark it just to be sure. And three more chapters to go, yay
Archangel Change24 chapter 6 . 7/4
So you obliterated their relationship over the course of two chapters for WHAT reason? Because from what I can see the only issue was Harry broke a promise not to go to the shadowlands without Aalya. From my point kf view I see Harry risk his existence and “life” multiple times for someone who he loves. Then when he almost breaks himself to make the damn potion and spends a week comatose he gets fucking SHUNNED immediately after! Like this dude went above and beyond for his loved ones and then just had the door slammed on his foot for MONTHS….. then following that they just seem to fracture more and more for no discernable reason…. This just…. Really pisses me off.
Drax Demonix chapter 6 . 6/28
Please continue this amazing story! I cant wait to see what happens next! I also want to see the trial for Maris! I want more! Your writing is amazing and i love how long your chapters are! I hope you will continu and i wish ulyou good luck!
ReviewerPops chapter 6 . 6/25
Epic. Here's to hoping you come back with more inspiration to this story. If not good fortune to you.
leuma14 chapter 6 . 6/26
hope you update soon
fabriglas chapter 6 . 5/29
Different and interesting keep it coming pls?
EliteShadow chapter 6 . 5/27
i hope to read more of this great story keep up the great work hope to read more chapters soon please keep on updating!
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