Reviews for Change In Winds |
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![]() ![]() ![]() so shitty dude so shitty |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahahaahahahahahahah fucking give him everything at this point dude. guve him every fucking kekkei genkai that exists the way you are going. i just got to the part where kushina is talking the absorption part and holy shit you are actually doing that! ahahahahahahahahahahjahahahahaahah |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is some gary stu level bullshit. i thought the fights would atleast been interesting but nooooo you don't even describe their fighting just saying they are doing stuff. just fone and you expect people to join your patreon for this shit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what the fuck are you talking when we see kakshi talk to zabuza and others would also hear him and zabuza talking after the fight and zabuza leaves so what the fuck are you writing dude,missing words,weird ass grammar sometimes active sometimes passive voice. also just horrible character writing,you can't just decide on what characterisations you are keeping,you keep forgetting then dude. wtf! |
![]() ![]() ![]() To add onto an earlier criticism I don't think it's necessary for a fictional person to get raped just so Naruto has an excuse to kill bandits, I think it'd be more compelling if he just did it and fucked up on his first endeavor, either taking a blade to the body or accidentally killing a hostage, it will allow him to grow |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know you don't have to make sakura worse right? She was already pretty bad in the source material, why not keep her the same at the beginning and build up her usefulness? |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for continuing! needed another chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() great new chapter cannot wait to see what happens next continue this as soon as possible please |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was great would like to know what happens in the story please |
![]() ![]() please update it is a great story and i would like to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why have u made them pass so fast for them to fight orichimaru anyway |
![]() ![]() ![]() this 12 y/o kage met 3 kages |
![]() ![]() When tje new one out? It has been looooooonnngg,,,,, |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to Chapter 19. |