A bullshit story writing
You think you are making naruto smart but you are not
You just know the future ahd thats how Naruto seem to know everything
That's not how a story writing works
This is how a thought process works
1)You have a question
2)you make a few arguments most of which are wrong
3)And at the end you take one of them as the correct anwer but you don't know which really is correct so your chance of getting right is minimal (In short "your" conclusion)
But what you do is
You without having a question you reach to a conclusion
Which is a recepie for a bogus story

just kill danzo already man

Ok...grammar again a problem and the whole chapter has several problems. First, the conversation between the clones makes no sense, and made it sound like Kakashi placed a genjutsu on them. Second, after hearing naruto ask two questions he is seen as dumb bij haku, what?

I like the story, but the grammar is all over the place. Bee Jutsu? Medics are apparently 'white people'?

so shitty dude so shitty

hahahahaahahahahahahah fucking give him everything at this point dude. guve him every fucking kekkei genkai that exists the way you are going.
i just got to the part where kushina is talking the absorption part and holy shit you are actually doing that! ahahahahahahahahahahjahahahahaahah

this is some gary stu level bullshit.
i thought the fights would atleast been interesting but nooooo you don't even describe their fighting just saying they are doing stuff. just fone and you expect people to join your patreon for this shit.

what the fuck are you talking when we see kakshi talk to zabuza and others would also hear him and zabuza talking after the fight and zabuza leaves so what the fuck are you writing dude,missing words,weird ass grammar sometimes active sometimes passive voice.
also just horrible character writing,you can't just decide on what characterisations you are keeping,you keep forgetting then dude. wtf!

To add onto an earlier criticism I don't think it's necessary for a fictional person to get raped just so Naruto has an excuse to kill bandits, I think it'd be more compelling if he just did it and fucked up on his first endeavor, either taking a blade to the body or accidentally killing a hostage, it will allow him to grow

You know you don't have to make sakura worse right? She was already pretty bad in the source material, why not keep her the same at the beginning and build up her usefulness?

thanks for continuing! needed another chapter.

love this story

great new chapter cannot wait to see what happens next continue this as soon as possible please

that was great would like to know what happens in the story please

please update it is a great story and i would like to read more