Kinda starting off cliche and decent but I'm interested so I'm gonna give it a chance

Es un capítulo interesante pero lo esperaba un poco más largo es muy bueno general pero creo que le falta más contenido, pero tu eres el escritor mi única recomendación es que el capitulo sea un poco más largo. El resto bien.

Good story keep it up

I liked this chapter.

Es buen capitulo pero esperaba que fuera un poco más largo yq que no hubo actualizaciones 3n esta historia desde algunos meses, pero dejando de lado esa sugerencia muy bueno general

What I don’t understand is why do sasuke and Sakura think that they some how have a right to know everything about naruto and his skills. You don’t see naruto asking sasuke how he learned his fire jutsu or how Sakura learned her useless no jutsu(patent pending) and why does naruto humor them ? He needs to make them understand they have no right to demand anything from him

Awesome read . Looking forward to reading next chapter

Thanks for the chapter!
I'm looking forward to seeing what you will have adding the elements before the rasengan is finished do to it, as I have not seen that before.

I liked this chapter.

Danzo,up to no good as usual

Team 10 (and Sakura) needs massive amounts of Physical Conditioning. Sure Chojis weight is for his family's style, but all their stamina needs increasing.

The Bridge of Hope.

Hola me gusta mucho como escribes espero que continúes la historias ya que son muy entretenidas y buenas las historia eres un gran escritor y me gustaría continuar leyendo más de tus historias espero que actualize lo más pronto posible se lo agradecería mucho y feliz cumpleaños naruto

Honestly it's because FanFiction is stuck in the past and the design of the website sucks. The fact that reviews are permanent, and only show up on a separate page where you have to wade through the garbage comments to find something conducive. I read on multiple sites and I like the open ended discussion style of all the other websites. Here on fanfiction I don't usually bother with it, I just like or favorite. Unless something just really needs to be said.

I apologize. I truly enjoy your stories, but rarely bother commenting anything and I am quite certain quite a lot of readers do the same. I understand perfectly well that it can get frustrating for a writer to put in that many hours of work, while the readers don't even bother commenting. I can imagine that this might seem disrespectful towards you. The gist is this: Readers are a lazy bunch who simply want to read and try to avoid to take a few minutes of time to comment the individual chapters. You are right to call us out on this and you do deserve some recognition and praise for the hard and good work you have put in so far. Please continue delighting many of us with regular updates to your stories. This being said, ... your message towards us, while being absolutely correct and deserving of a response, comes of a bit harsh. It kind of felt like a serious "f you", which might upset quite a few readers. I do express you my apologies for not commenting more often/at all. I am one of those readers though who simply unfavourites a story or author if I feel his story/stories are no longer up to the desired quality or no longer suits my interests. This hasn't been done for you on my part so far since I have been always satisfied with your work. Please don't take it to heart if I don't comment that often. I most certainly approve of the story you have written so far. Please keep up the good work. I will try to make an effort and tcomment more regularly.