Reviews for Change In Winds |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter... I hope you don't move this fic as a bashing one. I really want to know what happens when he learns Minato is his father, who put this burden on him.I always wonder why Minato did could have sealed nine tails inside Obito(masked man) could have taken Naruto during his childhood Minato didn't considered Jiraya too was absent for all these time. If there is a pairing my vote is for Temari... Hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good going |
![]() ![]() ![]() I personally really like your story it’s very interesting it has a lot of potential I hope you keep on going with it a lot of people seem to like to stop for some reason but I like where it’s going and I want to see where it keeps on going I love you in other peoples imagination being written it’s so interesting to see people put into words and I can’t wait for the next chapter this and what are your other works actually so I hope that you continue with those and you have a good academic scores and I hope to see another chapter on the story thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will Naruto get a Summons that’s wind based |
![]() ![]() ![]() super your new chapter, this interesting what happens like the fact that naruto wants a strong girlfriend, I hope naruto will not be in a relationship with sakura nor hinata, nor ino, tenten and nor Kurotsuchi, given the first three are weak and useless, tenten is better in a relationship with neji and the last one because of the fact that she hates naruto's father, I prefer naruto to be with a strong woman even if she is older than him, like anko, hana, kurenai, yugao, yugito, mei, samui, termari, guren and more, if not continue like that, what you are doing is interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Started this fic and completed the first chapter ... Your writing is good. My only concern is the rate at which the story take your own time to elaborate more if it is a tree climbing excercise give more notes and seems the story is progressing too quickly. Regarding Naruto don't make him too overpowered too him take his own time to train and get after all this training he should be somewhat weaker than Sasuke during the bell can surpass him in his Sharingan he may become too op . Just give him some weakness and mental troubles he is facing due to the villagers all stuffs. Anyway good luck with future updates... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really interesting fic, writing is good as always but you left some open places that we can fill in and some foreshadowing as well. I’m excited to see where you’ll take this ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() No NaruHina or Ino. Character development first. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, make him more flirty! Hope he gets Ino and Hinata! Maybe Hana too, just make Kiba squawk an idiot, lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this I hope you continue this is a really good set up you have here it’s very interesting can’t wait to see more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good going. The change naruto is going through wasn't it a better chance for kyubi to make contact with him to try to manipulate him subtly? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting stuff looking forward to more |