Hola
No conocía este fanfics hasta que lo escuché en Youtube, gracias por esta historia, en realidad gracias al final espero una continuación del mismo.
Cuando empecé a escucharlo, todos comentaban que no les gustó el final. Pensé algo terrible como otros fanfics que conozco, y la verdad no fue así.
La historia es disfrutable, me gustó mucho, entiendo a Hinata, ella entreno mucho y adquirió mucho poder para poder proteger y apoyar a sus seres queridos, pero en especial a Naruto; y Naruto la deja de lado en sus principales peleas para "protegerla"; Hinata es una niña y mujer gentil y muy tolerante en un mundo de ninjas, los cuales son entrenados para asesinar y hacer y deshacer en nombre de sus aldeas y sus líderes, Hinata por ser heredera está destinada y se espera mucho de ella, así que me encanta que ella pueda tomarse este tiempo y se autoanalice y pueda descubrir su potencial y su felicidad; es más desearía que Naruto también hiciera esto; este niño/hombre (tenemos que recordar que tienen 12o 13 años) cuyo deseo es liderar un grupo de personas que son capaces de aislar y maltratar niños por algo que no son culpables... Yo de Naruto jamás sería Hokague.

the story was good but that ending was crap xD

Aww man, here I thought I was gonna give u an amazing idea to bring back hinata :( but I think ur done with this story. But before that I must say the last chapter was amazing and when she left I had tears come in my eyes, maybe bc something similar thing happened in my life but she never came back idk but props on making a really good chapter. As for my idea on how to bring back hinita was like this, I wanted her to come back in the 4th great ninja war. Just imagine this, him fighting madara again with or some big threat and she came back right when he was about to die a horrible death for example in anime when naruto lost kuruma and he couldn’t breath and Sakura cut the side of his belly and put her hand in to pump his heart physically kinda like that situation but where hinata saves Naruto’s life by like deflecting a massive attack or a life threatening attack that was going to kill him and the emotional reunion would let’s say empower him and hinata and beat the threat and she comes back to live with naruto and u could end the story then as a happily ever after. Hmm what do u think? anyways if u do plan to continue I can’t wait but if not that’s fine too. It was a amazing story, see u next time when u make more stories.

Ooh one last thing (sorry). I also LOVEEEEEEEE The Beginning After The End and I see what u did in this story with burst step and god step especially ur first story that I read “naruto: storm release” with him doing what Arthur did when he was fighting that asshole in his class for adventure in school when fighting that wyke or whatever the flame dude who was half elf turn bad and betrayed the school where Arthur made a vacume around his entire body and held his breath so the fire didn’t work on him since u need o2 oxygen to make fire and ye that was an AMAZING TOUCH! And many other scenarios I loved them all.

Also idk if u heard since we both big fans of the beginning after the end fans but I’ll let u know just incase. *drum rolls* ITS GETTING A FUCKING ANIMEEEEEEEEEERERE! So, I hope ur excited as I’m and will be when it comes out and watch it bro. Anyways see u next time (I will still read ur other stories tho just letting yk )
peace
-J

Whens the sequal coming?

I know im late but I hope you found the peace and happiness every deserves.

well i just read the whole thing and i liked it i hope you do a fallow up with it sorry im a bit late to reading it but i hope you are still going and i hope you have a good day if you are reading this

I had to binge the story again, bro it’s really good and it sucks You lost the motivation for it for sure. Sometimes as a author you just have to realize that the story is going to be the story and the reviews don’t make or break it…some of these people review to see if they can get a reaction… they were probably glad you stopped the story. The only ones that missed out on this are your loyal fans and I consider myself one and you yourself. I understand that peace of mind is priceless though so I do support you in your endeavors. good luck out there, bro

I respect your decision as this is your story but I got invested in this story and i deeply hope for a continuation one day as this is one of the best Naruto fanfics I have ever read.

why are you calling it elements? its chakra nature not elements.

whyyyyyyyyy.. waahhhh... i thought i found a complete naruhina story with an ENDING.. most naruhina stories are not yet complete or updated YEARS agooo, ages ago.. haysss

Chaper 28 place

This story is great.. Like you said you keep doing you and it'll only get better.

Here you go. As in dozens of fanfictions before this, the arc in the land of waves is fucked up. Naruto's decision to fuck off "spy" on Orochimaru is idiotic. You have a fucking KABUTO IN THE VILLAGE! Then this unnecessary Gilgamesh... It's just... Why litter your own fanfic with bullshit?

Well, damn, the author said that Naruto will be the only one who travels from the future. This Hina DEFINITELY doesn't act like canon Hinata. Fuck, they’ve been talking for two days, and she already feels so confident with him that she’s ready to hug him in a public place. Ugh.

Hinata is too OOC. It's a pity.