Reviews for Journey To Raftel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() the moment he grab that staff and it extended i knew what type of monkey he was the goat sun wukong |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have got me hooked |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thnx for the chapter. I can’t in all honesty see mr 3 and miss goldenweek being much of a problem here. Luffy is just too strong and Nami could just melt the wax if anyone does get captured. Will anyone be inflicted by kestia and could Reiju just absorb it orally like she did MH5 me wonders, how would that affect Chopper joining? Looking forward to the next one to get the answers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() heyo, was rereading your novel, really nice that you cut ussop from the crew, was hoping that Reiju could become the doctor instead of Chopper, would be cool and would take the annoying pet off :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it go Reiju ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it really good writing you did a fantastic job on the first part didn’t think you add it in you. Need more |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know reading this again and thinking back on the comment made about the crew gathering rare and mythical devil fruits. I wonder if this story plans to include that one theory that's going on about Chopper. Besides the pun of Tonakai(reindeer) and Tanuki(raccoon dog) being similar. There's also the matter of Tanuki being known for transformations which Chopper has many forms for compared to normal zoans. The general theory by some is that his devil fruit was really a mythical Tanuki fruit and he's just in denial of it. A level of intelligence is also associated with them as well as gullibility. |
![]() ![]() Fun chapter! |
![]() ![]() Sooner than later Luffy should show carina and vivi what he can really do like he's done to nami since their both curious of what he can really do when their alone with him and give them both a experience they won't forget also have vivi officially join luffys crew after crocodile is defeated so she can see what the rest of the world is like see new places learn and experience alot of new things she never knew about before |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! thanks for the amazing chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again your fics never fail to impress and this was a good chapter can I suggest a solution for the two morons about to ruin everything. Candleman gets eaten by giant goldfishy and painter lady is forced to become cabin girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here's hoping that Luffy will more or less instantly know when Mr 3 and Miss Goldenweek arrive on Little Garden, so that he can stop Mr 3 from grabbing Dorry and Broggy to collect their bounties. I wonder if you'll have Miss Goldenweek join the Straw Hats, since I think she was the most friendly of Baroque Works |
![]() ![]() Not god levels of ki don’t want luffy to be too overpowered but like island level or something not even strong enough o blow up the moon he’ll roshi could do that at a powerlevel of 180 don’t want to make Luffy too strong. |