Hey when are you gonna update this story,I hope you are okay and that nothing bad has happened to you but this story has been untouched in almost a year.

Akira Toriyama Nr 1

Why doesnt he just cut of his arm along with he ring? Or ask the time patrol to remove the damn thing and send him back?

Rest in peace Toriyama

Beerus is lazy and does below minimum for his job but the Kai does go even lower than that and are completely passive.
There the supreme Kai of Universe 7 is the worst as he is not really trying.

you are having some SERIOUS trouble keeping track of the power levels. if its this bad, you shouldnt use it. it does nothing but confuse the readers at this point disrupting the flow of the story.

Kronel is Kakarot and Chronoa's Son from the Future isn't he?

I really hope this won't turn into a cringe disgusting harem that only weirdos like.

i saw the description of this and i thought it bad now reading it it's amazing

I love Dragon Ball Z and Android 18 Bulma Chichi Videl and Erasa. I'm hoping for a new DBZ story. Akira tobirama is the best.

I want more of this one too.

Really not digging the forcing him into XenoVerse stuff, pretty lame. Would've preferred him just staying in "canon" and that goin on, this blows tbh

Namekians really are op when they're utilized properly, especially guru

You predicted right i would be annoyed by this chapter. It kinda is like if someone decided to say “This is the jumpchain for a story and the character has no say in things at all.”

Ok, what a big fucking hypocrite he's being. He screams at Goku for not taking fights seriously just to make them fun and he's literally doing that here.