It's almost perfect, only some small problems that dont affect the overall fluffyness of the story. I think some of the characters sounded not like themselves. Or not British/French enough (calling someone "bro" is not British or french, i believe), and while i think it's cute. I think calling Dora cheveu is a bit strange to keep doing when Dora and Harry were grown up. While i think you have got child to adult for Fluer down, I think Harry sounds like he didn't mature as much as the other characters as he got older. The way he still acts effeminate and childish in some ways doesn't portray his maturing properly. I think in some ways his passivity shows immaturity and calling "Papa/Mama" when he's a man doesn't help. All in all, i believe that Harry needed to show a bit of his manhood, nothing as overt as beating up bad guys. But more along the lines of dressing in a suit and Fluer taking his arm and leading her to dinner, opening the door for her, pulling out her chair. Showing his gentleman nature while also keeping the kindness would have worked, I think the too many friends and characters kinda put that growth (or the showing of that growth) on the back burner.

Reread this story for possibly the fourth or tenth time. Absolutely amazing this time as it was the first. Would have loved to see idiot simons reaction to the snakes being gone. Maybe with a note left behind! Again thanks for a wonderful story.

Loved how you fonished out the story, and I hope you fond it in you to pick up the lightningbell fic somewhere in the future!

I’m so glad the fic is complete and I can binge it because the wait between chapters would absolutely kill me lol

"after all, Harry was fifteen, Fleur was seventeen, and this was France – views on intimacy were quite different compared to Britain."

I just discovered tonight, as a direct result of re-reading this story, that at that time there _was_ no age of consent in France. In fact, France did not set an age of consent until _2021_. And it was almost set at 13 rather than 15.

Love the story, would love to see some of the left out parts ;) but them being left out does not take away at all!

Getting slowly tortured to death for 14 years is the exact sort of punishment Voldemort deserves.

I do have to say that the Harry/Flyer scenes of this story have become my least favorite scenes as they are all intimate moments. We do not get to see them do anything other than kiss and cuddle. Don't get me wrong, I knew that this was a Flurry fic. I just thought that there would be more substance and not just fluff.

You have the Tonks/Sirius cousin relationship incorrect. The Black family tree shows that Sirius is mother (Walburga) is Andromeda's father's sister. This makes Sirius and Andromeda 1st cousins. Any child of Andromeda's would be Situate 1st cousin once removed. If Sirius had children, then his children and Andromeda's children would be 2nd cousins.

Just still surprised you didn't have French Gringotts reveal the manor/castle? was a Potter property.

Seems very much wrong for the magical adults to "tar with the same brush", "make blanket assumptions", just because other kids lie.

This story was amazing! I love it! It would be cool to see some glimpses into their future if you ever get a chance to write them. Thank you so much for this experience.

This is nonsensical. What utter trash.

as if harry would not be safe in france

Bribery to join Quidditch. I guess the map is a good reason.