Nice chapter

nice chapter thx for writing it

Great chapter man and it’s okay if the events are slow because I really like your story and how it’s going.

nice

Hmm. Yes. I usually don't like dream sequence chapters, and only tolerate them because they add and sometimes necessary to the plot. But for some reason I greatly enjoyed that one.

Many people talk about romance again. I already said everything I wanted, but that was some time ago, and the reviews pulled my attention to the topic again. An I like to rant about it. Khm. Well, I still hope it would be only Bell/Ryuu. And two girls is already a harem. And harems aren't really a romance anyway. I believe people like them for one of the three reasons:

1. Because it a status thing. To have many girls is to be "cool", because it's one way to "be powerful".

2. Because it offers a lot of sex. Even I, with my disgust to harems won't turn down sex with several women simulatiously. To have a harem is to have that on constant basis.

3. Because of misjudged belief that more girls more love. People want to be loved, people crave to be loved, people can't live a full life without being loved, and so they dream of a lot of love. Some think, that if you loved by more than one girl it would add. It is even true, to an extent, but it is a lot less true than people like to believe, and it comes with significant cost to love girls recieve in return and, therefore, at the cost of their happines.

I tried to imagine some scenarios where a girl I love convinces me to join a reverse harem. I failed. I don't know why it should be the other way around with females, when they have power not to.

Ugh. I hope I managed to undermine harems in your eyes, at least a little bit. I usually don't try that hard to convince someone, instead I either quietly leave, or throw a tantrum after the harem is already set in stine. But, I suppose, I invested on this fic an unusual degree.

THAT was definetly the last time I talk about it, I hope. Only if I am asked directly I'll say anything else. I like to rant how harems a "bad" and all, but there are much more to this story then just romance. Or harem. I don't want to became too fixated on that.

The chapter was really great. I am curious how you'll incorporate the invasion mechanics. Is there any other Hunters in DanMachi world? Or was she from somewhere else? Does it even have a role in plot? Other than that, to see Bell succumb to bloodlust was an unique experience, but oddly enjoyable. And it explains his current state.

OH. That was unexpected but I love it.
Just a short question.
After rereading the last chapter, I was wondering how he knew Ryus level?
Did he, perhaps figure out who she is?

Looking forward to the next chapter!

In all honesty... write the story you want to write at your own pace. I will happily read and review when I have the time. Was Bell invaded by Alice of all people - given the red hair and proclivity for flames? And it was nice to see him lose out to his bloodlust and get drug into the Hunter's Nightmare because he DID in fact become blood drunk of his own accord. Also... I kind of want to see Alice vs Bell Round God-D***ed Two... maybe without the murder though... hahaha...

Also, thank you for responding to my main review. I look forward to seeing Bell and Ryuu interact when that time comes, particularly if he DID encounter Alice. God only knows how Ryuu is going to react to learning that her former captain was (possibly) sent to the same blood-stained hell as her newest friend... Nevermind that it is also possible Alice ascended the Hunt as well if she was in a different time... or not. That just opened many different possibilities.

I don't want to tell you how to do your own writing, but you can speed the story along if you're unsatisfied with the pace of things. None of use know what level of detail you've originally planned, so glossing over things your don't want to dwell on is unlikely to affect our reading experience. Regardless, excellent work as always.

This chapter was great! Was that Alise Bell was fighting?! Was anyone else from Danmachi brought to the Bloodborne world and did Bell fight them?
Also another question. In your crossover story, are the Great Ones from Bloodborne and the Gods from Danmachi equal in their divine power? Or is one group of deities more powerful than the other? Hopefully the next chapter comes out sooner!

Man this chapter was amazing! I don’t really mind if you had more chapters like this with the focus on what happened in Yharnam, and I’m sure many others would agree as well, especially with that character you introduced at the end there! Was that actually Alizé that Bell fought in the Dream!? I honestly did not expect you to bring her back, but I’m all for it! Alizé is an incredible character, and her being alive and in the Dream would be awesome to see, especially if she does make it to Orario and reunited with her best friend.

And I don’t know why, but Bell x Alizé has become really popular in fanfiction for some reason even though the two never met, but hey! If you’re planning on having Bell have a harem then why not include her too? Ryu and Alizé hunting after that White Rabbit lol.

Also loved the description you gave for Amygdala and how Frenzy affects the player. Really loved seeing Bell come into contact with the Eldritch truth, and how he started to succumb to bloodlust. Increased insight in/game makes you more susceptible to Frenzy, and I loved seeing it in action here!

Also, did Bell just haul Gilbert’s body all the way from the main entrance to Yharnam all the way to Oedon Chapel? Lol that’s quite a trip to bury a body!

Looking forward to your next chapter, and how things will play out in Orario and the Waking World. You’re writing is absolutely stellar and a treat for the eyes. You earned every single favorite and follow, and it’s insane now you got this popular in only a few chapters! Keep up the amazing work, and take as much time as you need. I too envy those guys who can write 30k words in two weeks!

That was a really cool flashback on a piece of what happened to Bell on The Night of the Hunt! Who was that invader? Someone in Bloodborne or in DanMachi?

Oh now that you mentioned it was in chapter 4, I am now starting to question myself on how I did not even see such an obvious hint. Maybe I am becoming mad as I am getting older or maybe a Great One has messed with my thoughts and dreams, I am not certain. If you do find me speaking ramblings of a mad man jn the comment section of the next chapter please be sure to contact the nearest Healing Church outpost as I may need help.

I'm confused about where this disdain for Gods actually comes from... comparing them to great ones isn't correct and automatically assuming that they are all the same doesn't make any sense. the only thing that remotely does is that he is thinking the worst of everyone, but he isn't. he treats people depending on how they interact with him...

Nice story