As always, I loved the chapter.. Keep up the good work..

this story is good but feels extremely slow to the point where I feel like skipping things because you don't need to read them to know what's going on you can just skim read the chapters

yup I take back about artemis in the harem she's an outright bitch in this story

harem for the win! add those Japanese demigod along the tartarii idk if you can make artemis fit

Obviously late to the story, but this just seems unbelievable from a story perspective. Clearly Percy and Jason are being influenced and manipulated, but the dialogue makes it clear that you’re leading to manipulation. Percy being unwilling to even talk to anyone or even comprehend what they tell him just doesn’t make sense also the questions he asked are vague enough that they lead to an answer pitting him against the gods. Other than that good story just irks me

Holy Shit I just caught up with this fanfic and I gotta say it’s the best I’ve ever read! From the world building to capturing the personalities of the PJ universe, I loved every second of it. Hope you update soon!

Eyy! Another chapter came out :D (Ignore spelling mistakes and grammar issues please :P)

I think I'll address this before moving onto the chapter, thank you for taking your time on this. The level of quality you produce cannot be exaggerated it's that good, but of course that takes time, time which I'm super glad you take :) I've seen multiple FanFiction stories, PJO & not, start off incredible and slowly become more and more cluttered and rushed as the chapters come along. The author begins to rush their content as they try to stay on schedule and/or please their readers as soon as they demand an update. I'm glad you actually take your time on this, regardless of what's happening in your life, as this story is consistently outstanding. Take all the time you need because this is truly a story you should be proud of, and I hope you are proud of it. :)

Alright, onto the chapter. :D

I'm incredibly grateful you didn't go the "Rick route" with Gaea here and actually made the primordial live up to the hype it's been given throughout the Heroes of Olympus and your own story. The disappointment I felt when Gaea was told to sleep in Rick's story was very much present as I read that part... Again, I'm glad you didn't make them some weak ass primordial that's had so much build up. The apocalypse that's going on around the world was really well done! I'd say the reactions you gave the characters were pretty realistic too given what's happening to them. In all the chaos that's happening they have no idea what to feel as they see as the world essentially crumbles around them. Hestia being weakened as her domain is taking its toll, Ren unable to accept what's happening to Tokyo that she has to tone it out completely, Leo going all angry on Gaea... Really well done! As what happened to Gaea at the end of the perspective makes me guess another god or primordial from another pantheon intervened. Guess it was left pretty vague there on purpose huh :P

Great to see the Japanese demigods again! Now that I've seen their perspective I see what you mean when you said you couldn't fit them in the previous chapter. It'd be pretty confusing to see their reactions to an apocalypse before we even know why or how there is one in the first place. Kobayashi was a pretty neat character to say the least, pretty mysterious but they seem to be pretty chill (pun intended) to an extent once you get to know them. The only thing I'm really curious about here is why Ren would've made a deal with them in the first place? It might've been mentioned in the chapter, as at one point Koba mentioned that Ren might've been asking assistance for a hunt, but I doubt that would've been enough of a motive for Ren to make a deal with a death spirit... This was probably answered in the chapter and it just flew over my head, but I just wanted to say that in case I missed something. Don't take that as me dissing that perspective though, I most definitely enjoyed reading this whole thing! :D

Ok, so the Norse demigod time has come and boy do they look intresting! I must admit I never finihshed the Magnus Chase series so this might actually motivate me to do so lol, I might get some more understanding of what some of the words and places mean. Anyways, I can say these new demigods of yours have caught my eye and I'm 100% hyped for what's to come with them. Halsinger, though we've seen very little of him so far, is starting to remind me of some of my mates in real life in terms of personality so you can count on me on giving a couple chuckles between Alex & Hal's banter. You got a real talent of hooking people onto characters almost the moment they're introduced it's great! And just like every other character in this story, I can't wait to see more of them :P

Again, I love this story to bits and I can now confidently say that this is my all time favorite fan fiction story and is up there with some of my favorite published stories of all time. You're amazingly talented and I hope you know that! See you in the next chapter! :D - Roryrex

well no words to describe this chapter. This is what apocalypse looks like. Or a character like Gaea should have been unlike the utter embarrassment that rick wrote. Really excited to see addition of yet another pantheon and eager to see where it will go. Also I'm quite excited to know who that entity is who stopped gaea? Must be primordial as he/she called her sister but considering the 'my realm' statement from gaea could be another pantheon?! Hoping to see the next one soon. You just keep crossing the expectations...

...all im willing to say in response to the excitement bubbling within my core is,HUZZAH FUCKERS, THIS IS THE BEST THING IVE EVER READ
You legit did what rick himself couldnt, added the japanese and MADE A STORY CONTAINING FULL BLOWN APOCALYPSE AND MORE THAN ONE PANTHEON!
Legit im gonna get drunk and dancing if youre planning on more pantheons cause you are a whole religion yourself at this point.
Islam? egyptian? indian? mayan?!
when will you stop being a genius is what i wanna know dammit XD

fuck yes, awesome as always bro, asbjorn is what a norse demigod should fucking be not that fucking embarrassment that was magnus chase lol. Hestia got humbled which is a fucking joy to read, hate the bitch

Best PJO fic out here right now. When the PJO show comes out and the fandom gets revived, this fic is going to blow up.

Loved it perfect chapter keep the updates coming

Just wanted to give a shout out to everyone. I haven't died or disappeared, but between my job and university my life is very busy right now, so I'm sorry that I haven't posted much this month! You can all expect to see another update before the end of this month, I am working on it I promise!

Anyhow, Thanks to everyone for your patience and support on this story! I love writing for you guys and I'm sure you'll all love what's to come, seeing as some people have been waiting months for them to make a reappearance, and now finally we get to see more of Ren, Akiyama and Tsu-yon.

Ill get it finished as soon as I can for yall!

Until next time!

- Sky

Great story, lots of angst. Thanks for the read.

Idk how this story doesn’t have more ratings because honestly this the best story I’ve read on here for awhile