Reviews for Percy Jackson: Shadows Rise
meryfcuckery chapter 25 . 8/2/2022
there goes hestias so called "peaceful" ways shes acting like as much as a bitch as she was in anatolia, goddess of family my ass
Uh oh chapter 25 . 8/2/2022
I really like story just not the biggest fan of kolasi, her whole scene with zeuz and the other gods felt so out of place for me kinda killed the whole chapter ngl
xXRedactedAccountXx chapter 25 . 8/2/2022
God I loved this chapter! (Ignore spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes, etc please :D)

Incredibly high quality writing as usual ending with a bomb shell of a cliff hanger, I mean seriously, Gaia is already back, Apollo is gone, Percy is god knows where, The "Seven" have made a plan, new character perspectives and the gods are essentially killing eachother. God damn you really went all out with this huh?

Gonna go over my thoughts and probably incorrect theories real quick. To me Gaia in this story so far was kind of like "oh so this is a bad enemy" and no more, to me no one really seemed too worried or cared for her the minute Percy's "death" was revealed to the olympians and I'm fine with that. The big reveal of Gaia's more meaningful presence in this whole ordeal was perfect in my opinion, chaos is unfolding as gods are beating eachother up and attempting to kill or protect Zues and out of no where Gaia just comes in. Can't wait to see what happens there. To word that better, Gaia felt kind of like a side villan up into her appearence in Olympus, reminding them that there is way more going on then what's happening already... Hope that made sense?

As for why she appeared, I'm most likely completely wrong and your reading this with the thought of "Oh boy, they're in for a surprise" but my guess is that the way she was brought back had something to do with Apollo. Wether sacrifice, prophecy maniupulation, Trials Of Apollo type things or god knows what else, I think something happened to him that brought her back. Probably wrong, but I can't wait to see what you came up with :P

Can't wait to see what the Japanese demigods are doing next chapter. Cya! - Roryrex
yoganksri chapter 25 . 8/2/2022
it is brilliant like always.. good way to end the chap. would be really interesting to see how gaea is already on Olympus, especially when she did not have percy's blood or even sally's for that matter coz she is with Cal. And especially the reaction of the demigods now when they see the proof once again that the gods care only about themselves and dont care about how many of them die or how much they lie or manipulate them so as to keep themselves safe. Even Hestia is an accomplice to that. I strongly believe that the demigods should tell others the truth. they have already established that they would do what is best for them even if it is to keep things away from them and to fuck OLYMPIANS as annabeth and piper said. So they should tell the truth as one, coz then olympians wouldn't be able to hurt them. And also the truth will eventually come out, so it is better that it comes out before from the nine, rather than later. Hoping for the next one to come soon. looking forward to see japanese demigods once again
HellRaiderS chapter 25 . 8/2/2022
Fckn helll that was awesome
sadasdasda chapter 25 . 8/2/2022
Great chapter and even tho im not a big fam of cliffhangers this is a good onr
meryfcuckery chapter 25 . 8/2/2022
marvellous as always g
Tarelectro chapter 25 . 8/1/2022
This has got me interested! Percy Jackson’s fatal flaw of loyalty has truly proved fatal, only for his enemies.
jiromanawari chapter 10 . 7/27/2022
"per se"

if you're going to use words, use them right.
Mclegend chapter 1 . 7/21/2022
One of the best pieces of writing I’ve read in recent memory
sadasdasda chapter 24 . 7/17/2022
Great story, keep up the good work!
sadasdasda chapter 24 . 7/17/2022
Great story, keep up the good work!
HellRaiderS chapter 24 . 7/5/2022
Bloody perfect
unknown chapter 24 . 7/4/2022
The battle scenes were awesome
However you have done with too many authors have done before
Leaving the enemy alive, half the time it looked like Percy just wanted to punch them or beat them up
When ur the last son as u so advertised all along, u don't leave enemies alive.
That is a glaring hole
truesonofstyxs chapter 24 . 7/4/2022
I've really enjoyed this story, absolutely love your writing. I noticed some strange things within the story, during the fight with aris Percy summons his sword twice 1 or 2 paragraphs apart, it just seemed odd and looked like it was a piece of editing that didn't get deleted before being rewritten. And the caliber of shotgun you listed doesn't really exist, like it kinda did in the easily 1900's I think but it's part of the weird evolution of guns so it's really convoluted and lost in time. I would just suggest it be a 12 gauge which is basically the most common size or a 20 gauge for accuracy sake but I mean it's your story haha. Love your work keep it up, it has helped my pass time since I got sick, can't wait for the next update.
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