| Reviews for Percy Jackson: Shadows Rise |
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   meryfcuckery chapter 25 . 8/2/2022 marvellous as always g |
| Tarelectro chapter 25 . 8/1/2022 This has got me interested! Percy Jackson’s fatal flaw of loyalty has truly proved fatal, only for his enemies. |
| jiromanawari chapter 10 . 7/27/2022 "per se" if you're going to use words, use them right. |
| Mclegend chapter 1 . 7/21/2022 One of the best pieces of writing I’ve read in recent memory |
| sadasdasda chapter 24 . 7/17/2022 Great story, keep up the good work! |
| sadasdasda chapter 24 . 7/17/2022 Great story, keep up the good work! |
| HellRaiderS chapter 24 . 7/5/2022 Bloody perfect |
| unknown chapter 24 . 7/4/2022 The battle scenes were awesome However you have done with too many authors have done before Leaving the enemy alive, half the time it looked like Percy just wanted to punch them or beat them up When ur the last son as u so advertised all along, u don't leave enemies alive. That is a glaring hole |
| truesonofstyxs chapter 24 . 7/4/2022 I've really enjoyed this story, absolutely love your writing. I noticed some strange things within the story, during the fight with aris Percy summons his sword twice 1 or 2 paragraphs apart, it just seemed odd and looked like it was a piece of editing that didn't get deleted before being rewritten. And the caliber of shotgun you listed doesn't really exist, like it kinda did in the easily 1900's I think but it's part of the weird evolution of guns so it's really convoluted and lost in time. I would just suggest it be a 12 gauge which is basically the most common size or a 20 gauge for accuracy sake but I mean it's your story haha. Love your work keep it up, it has helped my pass time since I got sick, can't wait for the next update. |
| xXRedactedAccountXx chapter 24 . 7/4/2022 Amazing chapter! Probably my favorite fight scenes so far, Ares was very weak in the books ngl so it's great to see him live up to his title. Also damn, Annabeth really is struggling emotionally right now huh? Her perspective this chapter was pretty depressing (though not badly written by any means, immaculate writing through out) and it's sad reading her thoughts about her hopes and dreams slowly dissapear... Amazing chapter as always, can't wait to see more of the Japanese demigods ;) |
| Anonymously96 chapter 24 . 7/4/2022 Percy is being unreasonably OOC and dumb this chapter. And Annabeth could've sworn on the styx or anything else Percy wanted to validate her claims While action wise the chapter was fully packed, found these couple points to be glaring plotholes. |
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/4/2022 Honestly wasn't going to read this story as I thought it was another Percy in Tartarus story which wasn't as good as I thought. Which makes me really glad i double checked as it has become one of my favorite fanfiction in this fandom. |
| Uh oh chapter 24 . 7/4/2022 God it's like almost 3 years since I've been into a Percy Jackson fanfic, this story seriously is amazing. I actually love how you're writing the whole Percy/annabeth side right now. I think a harem for Percy with annabeth as the main girl would work really well for this story. |
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/4/2022 I think it would be really interesting to see what would happen if the news about Percy being the Ardwyr was made public. The demigods love him and it would make an interesting development to see what their reactions would be that he turned on the Olympians. |
| Lekka chapter 24 . 7/4/2022 I have no words to express how awesome this was, super glad Sally is alive though. |