Man I really hope you keep you Percabeth. Call it boring or that there’s already a lot on the platform but I think it’s like that for a reason. IMO it’s hands down the best couple and typically whenever it’s anything else it feels kinda forced. Obviously the relationship has to change a bit considering character changes but I’d still definitely prefer Percabeth. Although I would also be ok with a Harem route as long as annabeth is still in it. Overall I trust that whatever you write will be great but this is just my 2 cents.

Hello! Big review ahead! (maybe idk, might be smaller then I think it is) Lot's of rambling to so beware lol.

I just found my FanFiction account so I won't need to act as a guest anymore lol. Unless someone sent a message in the time it took me to write this review, I'm the same person who wrote the review below me (Roryrex)... I thought I'd write a better review since this story is amazing and I wrote the last one at like 3am and I was tired as hell lol. Hopefully I cover everything I have to say here so I don't force myself to send another review :P (Please excuse any spelling/grammer mistakes, thanks :D)

The fight scenes in this story are top tier, some of the best I've ever read including offical published books. Every fight I've seen shows the characters (in most cases) struggling no matter how powerful them or their opponent is. Percy, which you've definitley made out to be an incredibly powerful character so far, has still sttruggled in every fight while still managing to look and act powerful, which I think portrays his character really well and you managed to blend the more dark Percy into this character pretty well. He is clearly struggling emotionally (especially in this chapter D:) and you always manage to write him in a way that many cannot succeed in writing themselves. Amazing job with that!

The OC's that you've implemented into your story so far are probably my second favorite part of this story so far (Of course fight scenes are first, what can I say? They're awesome). The Japanese characters you've shown are really neat and fit well into the story even if they've only really been shown outside of it. They interact in ways that I just find real funny and entertaining and each of their personalities are awesome! What I'm trying to say is, although they haven't really impacted the over-arcing story that heavily yet, I think they'll fit right in and I love them :) Hope to see more of them in the future! As for Cal... He's my favorite OC in the story so far. I love the mystery surrounding him and his amount of power he holds at manipulating people and the Aetherium is really interesting. You making him the father of Sally is also quite different as I've seen writers change Percys heritage before, but never them really interacting with his ancestors I guess? I hope that makes sense. Love Cal a lot though. As for the different portrayal of Sally, I like it. I think it fits the "mother protecting child" (for lack of a better word) vive quite well. She's strving to save her child at any costs whilst still trying to keep Annabeth and the crew alive. Love the characters, hope I didn't miss anything there lol

Relationships... Doesn't every author love them :) You said multiple times in the authors notes that you'll be trying to make the realtionships as great as you can whilst keep it entertaining but not absurd like the stereo-typical Fan Fiction. I trust you with this as from what you've presented to me, relationship wise and in general, is really damn good. I'm just curious where you'll go with it. As for the whole "Who should Percy pair up with" dilemma, I'm one of those "He should stay with Annabeth" guys. Judjing by other how much you listen to the reviews and majority of the vocal reviews distaste for the pair, I doubt you'll go through with it. I'll be slightly saddened but I don't really mind who he ends up with tbh. As long as it isn't something stupid like, bringing back Silena just so they can be together I won't mind. You've said yourself that you'll only do pairings that you think that'll fit into the story, and I trust you to live up to that :) I believe at one point you said you were considering a harem type thing and I'm all cool with that, again as long as it's not something abusrd like 15 girls... That'll just be nearly impossible to manage. (I'll also be very happy if you go with the harem idea and keep Annabeth in it, I really like their relationship and no one can stop me from hating it :D)

I love the plot so far with no one (Except I guess Gaea and maybe Cal?) being really a set in stone bad guy. The gods did bad things but so Nyx's plan isn't gonna bode well with everyone and this and that... It's an amazing complex plot. Again, I'm intrested to see how you implement the Japanese and Cal into the story more because they're definitley important from what I can tell. As much as I love a good complex story plot, I'm not the brightest reader. You'll probably see me forgetting things you've mentioned or misunderstanding something but I'm in the discord now so I'll probably find a way to make sense of it :)

Anyways... Sorry for the review for being all over the place! I'm not organized with anything so I hope you understood what I meant. Thanks for reading this, Bye! - Roryrex

This story is so damn good wth... I'm curious to see how you make everything pan out because you're a very talented author. Intrested to see what you're doing with the Japanese demigods (Which I hope to see more of) and Cal. I'm ngl Cal is my favorite OC character so far lol. I don't really care too much about relationships in stories but this story has got to be an exception. By the looks of things in your reviews and your tendency to listen to them (at least from what I can tell) means that Percabeth probably won't happen... In all honesty I hope to see them together the most but you seem to be considering some sort harm thing so if Annabeth is in there I'm all happy. I'll probably still be happy if she's not but oh well. Love the story so far, fight scenes are top tier and 100% the best bit for me. Great job and I'm looking forward to what is to come! - Roryrex

Perfect as always loved it looking forward for more updates

This world is so interesting! The history and magic you’ve built into it has been fascinating so far.

Good stuff Breh

i love the fact that you gave ares a symbol of power, hopefully he'll actually look like a god of war now, i always found it strange how weak he was, war gods should be op. Besides that awesome chapter as always

So Percy is pulling an Eren Yeager?

Awesome chapter.

i really like the power of earthquakes in his fists like shirohige from one piece

I’ll read it either way, whether it’s all in one book or three separate ones. I like stories better when they’re all compiled into one though, so that way it’s easier to keep track of the flow. I neeeedddd more of Percy lol

Dammmnnnnn perfect
Loved it perfect chapter keep the updates coming

One thing I’m not looking forward to (maybe I am…) is when Percy realises that he’s been lied to by Cal and the gods. He’ll feel so betrayed.

But I am excited for him expanding in his powers, and the Adwyrian language.

Great chapter, and Cal is definitely giving more Dr Brenner vibes.

Awesome chapter… as usual! I see the younger Olympians ignored those with experience of what a Ardwyr could do, now they want to fight with an enraged Perseus… let the curb stomping begin.

NO percabeth, it's boring something new. Percy/Reyna? Maybe Percy/Piper?