Awesome chapter... as usual.

" Illyiana added with a laugh, taking another large sip from her glass and draining it. "The Herald of Nyx, tearing the domain from "

I think the end of the sentence is missing.

Great story by the way. Relatable characters and a completly new and interesting setting in the PJUniverse. Keep on writing as you are doing a great job.

Let's go! A new chapter, it's been a while but I'm glad this is still happening. Can tell you care for the story and I'm happy to see despite all the changes in the real world you're still finding time to work on this :D. (As usual, ignore the grammar and spelling mistakes please o.o)

Chapter time!

The Annabeth POV was nice to see, it kinda served as a reminder of what happened recently to the demigods and we gleaned a bit more history off good ol' Chiron. The opening of the new Harpokrate plot line seems quite intriguing and I was wondering if you were gonna tie the Egyptians into the story eventually. It looks quite promising on that front, I can't lie. Currently wondering if Annabeth will actually try to do this personal quest solo, based on her current relationship with the Olympians I can see them trying to stop their children from following her and also her sense of Guilt (or even her pride?) could factor in here. Can't wait to see what happens in that Olympian meeting too, quite a bit went down in the last one. Well done on the later setup :D

Cal appears to be an even more complex character than I initially thought. From what my remarkably small brain can gather, he's a selfish, no so kind fellow who believes that the only way to avenge his fallen brethren is through Percy and perhaps Estelle. He also has a family torturing fetish. He also is standing right before death's door. He also has a fairly unhealthy relationship with Sally... He also has a laboratory where he commits experiments to nullify the Aetherium... He also... yeah... He's got a little too much going on for my pea brain lmao. Love what you're doing with him nonetheless because god damn, he is an interesting character. The plan Sally refers to of his seems to be explain intentionally vague so it can be explained or implied at a later point, which makes sense from their perspective as they both already know the plan but it's left me curious to say the least lol. Great job with this POV.

Another 2 Percy POV's! A dream come true :D He is understandably a lot more brooding in this story, but I'm glad there was still 1 or 2 bits of humor on his part. Sometimes FanFic authors change the character completely, and though that's fine in most cases, it can kind of mean a loss of the charm the character originally had. This depends on the story of course so it's not really feedback or anything, just saying I'm glad to see there's still some of Percy left. His thoughts on Annabeth further enhance this, in my eyes at least. Now for the best part of the chapter, the court scene! Obviously cool to see a bit more of how the court functions, Nyx's unforgiving rule as well as how her disciples interact with her. Real interesting to see. Her display of power is something we haven't really seen yet as well, making me not so certain of Percy's odds against her in a 1 on 1. As for Akhlys, she pretty much got what she deserved. For what she did in canon and her vendetta against Percy, her fate was inevitable. I've said this a lot, but I'm curious about all the change of domains happening when Percy kills her. Happy to see Percy is finally, properly and fully reunited with Estelle, can't wait to see some more of their interactions. Great job with the Percy POV's all the way round!

Loved the chapter as per usual. Based on what your saying it seems this Arc is going to end very soon, based on the new plotlines appearing, I can't wait to see what they hold :D I was also wondering if you'll be splitting the story arcs into different FanFic stories or not, I know some authors do so I was wondering if you would or not. Anyways, remember to take your time and enjoy working on this story! See you (hopefully) in the next chapter! :D - Roryrex

ps. Sorry about the lack of reviews, I don't really have a proper excuse for not writing them but I'll try to keep up! I've also abandoned my fanfiction account so you'll just see me review as a Guest from now on :)

Perfect as always loved it looking forward for more updates

wtf does cal have locked up is my biggest question.

Holy fucking shit this is absolutely amazing. Even before this chapter this fic was not only the best in the fandom, but the best I’ve ever read period. There is so much depth and complexity here I don’t even know where to start. Sally killing the real Jackson family was a twist I never would have predicted in a million years. Percy was fucking awesome as usual and that little scene at the end where Percy corrected Thaye’s name even though they’re fighting was so sweet. And the kiss. Absolutely yes. Keep it up.

Imma be honest I'm still not 100% how the end is gonna work burt this is BY FAR the best fanfic I've ever read. Props to you my man

Probably read this thing like 3 times over and just seems to get better and better. Really enjoy this story your really talented

This story is fantastic! Can't wait to see how everything turns out!

Omygods pls dont add piper to percabeth. Jasper has it's own spice. The story's perfect just the way it is.

Hello there,

first of i have to say that this story is absolutely effing amazing and i cannot understand why it has so few reviews. I just tried to favourite and follow it again, just for the last chapter XD. What you have done with the premise, how you expanded on Tartarus and the Ardwyrn - i seriously hope there is an inspiration from another book or series or smth because if you came up with all that on your own i shudder of the amount of work you have put into this - is simply frigging mind blowing and absolutely gripping. I have not taken my eyes from my phone while reading this, altough i am at work.

But back up to why i am writing this next to the reason that you totally deserve all the praise that comes your way. I actually wanted to ask you a question regarding the romance part of this story. It obviously is Annabeth and Percy (big questionmark with a slightly hopeful undertone because i adore that pairing) and i am fine with that, but i also kinda strongly dislike Jason while liking Piper as a character ... Sooo i wondered if you ever had inclination of challenging yourself any more (not that you need to, this thing is already challenging and amazing enough) and thought about adding piper to that Annabeth/Percy pairing so that its a proper three way relationship. I know its a weird thing to ask but the thought came up randomly when you had Jason shoot Percy in the back and with all the drama between Piper and Jason in this chap, i kinda remembered it. Also i never really read a threeway pairing with those three and i thought if someone can make it work, it probably is you.

Anyways this was just a random thought of mine, would be cool to hear what you think of this.

Have a good one and i cant wait for the next update.

Regards,
Reaper

Dissappinted Percy didn't listen to advice and there is no way annabeth and piper don't know that what they just did sat the campers against Percy.

Them saying ardwry are unnatural is annoying and hypocritical as it sounds like they're just the primordial version of demi gods. Wonder how long until a demi god realizes that which should scare them given how some of the gods talk and that doesn't even factor in humans.
Love what you done with Ares. It always annoyed what they has little ability in the way espionage, ingenuity, cunning, intelligence,strategy,and the ability to create given how all of that is part of war.

Thank you loved the insights

Why is Percy still mortal why doesn't he at least have partial immortality?
I don't see how telling Percy what's going is more dangerous than not or would cause more trouble than zesus and Kronos did