When Kronos and his brethren slew their father Ouranos, Aphrodite was born of his genitals falling into the ocean. Which means she was born before 1st gen olympians. If she was around long before they were, would she not have already known of the Tartari, the betrayal of the Tartari by the Olympians, the entire genocide of the Ardwyr, everything the elder gods explain in this chapter? As a matter of fact, what did she spend her time doing before becoming an Olympian. Because there is a pretty solid gap between her being born, and her becoming and the 1st gigantomachy which the 2nd gen Olympian’s were around for in which we kinda know not shit about?

So Annabeth's soul is now permanently doomed because Percy decided to bring her back? Nyx claims he'll regret this decision but she never explains why. Why would Percy take action like he did without really knowing what would happen? If he truly loved her, which by all means he should, then he wouldn't risk bringing her greater harm by bringing her back like he did.

Considering his power, why couldn't he just bring her back later by leading her away from Elysium like Orpheus tried? The drama isn't really explained or justified in the story so far, and Percy's seemingly acting way OOC, even in the context of how he's been written so far in the story.

Too many perspectives. I can appreciate the interwoven narratives but I feel like I'm evolving ADHD from how often the perspective bounces around. There's a great story here but it seems like it's buried underneath all the back and forth that obscures all that's going on.

this is actually really good aside from the no punctuation at the end of each dialogue thing that occasionally shows up
this story is amazing

i love you sky

Hey! A new chapter just dropped :) (Per usual, please ignore all the spelling and grammar mistakes :P)

I know I addressed this in my last review (and many times in your discord along with many others) but again, I'm glad you're taking the time to sort out what's going on in your life before coming back to this story. The effort you put into this story is most definitely paying off really well and if life starts to get hectic again, don't feel pressured or stressed to finish the next chapter (Even if some of us do get impatient :P). Remember that your life is more important than pleasing your readers!

Alright, chapter time!

We finally got that Percy POV we'd been waiting for since chapter 24 (I believe) and it turned out really damn well! Percy since the drama & war on the surface seems to have finally broken so to speak. His thoughts are a lot more dark and depressing, he is becoming more violent and agressive to those around him... And yet becoming even more powerful. At this point I am now certain that Percy is always the most powerful person in the room, having killed gods, titans, and now seperating the Tartarean on the brink of death. It was clear from the start of the story Percy was going to be a powerful character, but god damn, it doesn't matter if you are a friend or foe but you'll want to stay as far from him as you can be. You've done a really good job portraying this dark side of Percy in your story, even if I miss the sassy jokes he once made. Amazing job! :D

Now onto the Fates... Let's just say I'm confused lol. I've never really been good at deciphering cryptic riddles, questions or sentences, but they've always left me intrigued. The Fates perspective left me in that view point. I really want to know more about the missing threads and mysterious new character but my brain don't work well enough to figure out the clues and problems you've left. Never the less I still found their perspective really intresting and well done. I've never really gave much thought into the way fate works in PJO but your take on it is really intresting. Again great job!

As for all the things I've missed, I'll try to cover my quick thoughts on them this paragraph. The new character Illyana seems to be the first sign (in the story) that you might go through with the "explicit" route with the story, which I'm fine with. I must admit the action is what I love the most in this story but the introduction of some steamy scenes wouldn't bother me if you catch my meaning... ;) The peak into Percy's future leaves much to be answered, though I do have my own (not so well thought out) theories of what it's about, I'm mostly again intrigued of what's to come. Estelle seems like she's gonna be a focal point in this story, or atleast this book, for Percy and his character development. I'm mostly wondering how Percy is going to look after Estelle. Another thing you got me intrested in!

As always, amazing chapter and I really enjoyed it! I don't know if I really got my points accross in the way I intended to do so but I hope you caught what I was saying lol. You're incredibly skilled and I can still proudly say I love this story to bits! See you in the next chapter! :D - Roryrex

Nice chapter! I’ve really enjoyed your world building!

Loved the last two chapters, somehow missed the last update but was excited when I saw 27 drop lol

My heart is breaking for poor Percy! But I hope we get to see more of the Fates, I really enjoyed their interaction with whoever that was… lol I look forward to that final revealAnywho, best wishes for what’s going on outside the inter webs and the story. Life comes first and I’m sorry you’ve had a hard go of it as of late.

Glorious as always my dude, can't wait for him to put the those shadow realm fuckers in there place

damn.. man that was a amazing chapter and harem for the win!

damn.. man that was a amazing chapter and harem for the win!

Perfect as always loved it keep the updates coming

Still one of the best fanfic I've read. Ironic considering i accidentally found it thinking it was another fanfic. KUTGW.

Awesome chapter. Glad you still ok.

As always, I loved the chapter.. Keep up the good work..