I'm still waiting for the love triangle

"The bible is majorly a lie but yes"

Fuck you too.

First of all, Terracotta Tortilla. Chill the fuck down man( or woman, whatever)

You sure do know how to criticise, yes we get it. It's not like you're paying to read. Neither is author getting paid(by you). So give off some sensible criticism and give some advice if you're that disappointed. Or, just don't read.

Secondly, Author, nice work, like most of yours. Gives off a slack off vibes from the start, then reveals the more complex plot. I like how you give cannon fodders their own stories and er, in cringey way of saying, life. It's a rather scarce concept since either it's killed off with relative no plot reason other than the most generic evil guy excuse or an easily forgettable harem candidate in the long line of women Issei gives lemon (in most DxD fics).

Also I appreciate how you can kill a character that's rather well liked like Penemune( if she's really dead as she is)

Just a complaint is that while you do try, but most of your iterations of character in each fics does ends up having predictable or just uncanny similarities with each other, like Issei, Penemune, Akeno.

So I suggest trying a different approach for characters, I mean, since this is a fanfiction, well, anything goes.

Yo, Issei based as hell in this one, let's go!

nice

Por un momento, cuando Lyzandra estaba teniendo su maremoto de pensamientos S y M, en serio me quedé impresionado por la idea de que haya una choque de espadas entre Issei y Ajuka hasta que leí un poco más y, bueno, claramente se estaba refiriendo al deseo de conocimiento y no deseo sexual jajsjajajaja... Si... La pedofilia gay interracial Demonio/humano no es viable, gracias a dios.

Blah blah blah, grimderp. Spooky scary edgy Issei oooh vewy scawy, vewy angy trihexa ooooh noooo.

God, I can't believe I once thought this story had any potential. It reads like a Worm self insert fanfiction, no wonder you changed the character so much, you've made him act like your perceived self.

You had to give the fodder angels plot armor? Really? You couldn't have just used a stronger character? You had to use the weak early-canon fodder characters and then give them random powerups?

Is this going to be grimderp? Just Issei and his ability to do nothing but destroy everything he touches, even on accident? Never contributing to any combat ever?

Is that what this is going to be?

Based Nerissa cover

Did you repost this?

Quite fun story, curious to see more

Serafall Memorial? Did she die? Because that is what memorial means. Like it was opened in memory of her

Good story though

I like where this is going, banger story so far mate

Loved the chapter! Looking forward to the next update