|Reviews for Magical Spider|
| dan.lew.upg chapter 37 . 9/23
Can't wait for more
| Kc Winter chapter 37 . 9/21
If i was gonna add apparition i would try to balance it so it would never be his go to method of travel. Like having a 5 second delay between apparitions without the risk of splinching and reduce the range down to just a block or two, or maybe only to things in seeing distance, so that under normal circumstances web slinging is still just as fast if not faster, and it gives you the ability to use apparating as a niche combat magic or an oh sh*t button when he needs to escape something fast, but wont detract from the spiderman stuff
| ReaperOfBalance chapter 37 . 9/21
Oooh, is kingpin making his debut now?
| albert87 chapter 37 . 9/21
Curieus to see where you'll take it.
| Alex1402 chapter 37 . 9/14
I have a feeling that this Harry/spider man will have a rather positive luck compared to most of his counterparts. He will defeat tombstone, impress Felicia and Robbie, which would lead to positive publicity of spider man and Felicia falling for him properly.
I mean so far most of the villains have not caused him any problems or deaths. Vulture was captured and maybe killed in prison, lizard is back to normal with no dead George Stacy.
| tamagat chapter 23 . 9/10
| Fire turtle chapter 37 . 9/7
For the apparate thing. You can make it so you can only do a short distance like to the other side of a wall or across the city block at most. And you can put limitations on it like he either keeps or loses his momentum when he apparates. For example if he was falling he could apparate and either lose the momentum, or he could have the momentum go up instead of down ,like in Portal. You could do either one or the other, or even both if you don't want to put limitations.
Also when is he going to meet the Symbiote? And when he does meet the Symbiote is he going to have ALL of Venom's powers?
| Ezequiel Goni chapter 37 . 9/8
In what order do you take out the chapters? And one from Star Wars would be great or Percy Jackson, I'm a fan, keep it up
| insanecoop chapter 37 . 9/8
A short but good chapter
| myafroatemydog chapter 36 . 9/8
Damn good chap
| myafroatemydog chapter 35 . 9/8
Lretty great chapter
| buterflypuss chapter 37 . 9/7
| fallendemon248 chapter 37 . 9/7
Damn I did not make the connection that it was tombstone and both Felicia and Robbie are now in working for him. Wonder why tombstone wants Robbie thou Felicia I understand but not him
| Fireknight58 chapter 37 . 9/7
If it matters any, I vote for Harry keeping a symbiote.
Also, you could have it where apparating causes Harry to become very nauseous (I think thats how it is in the books but im not sure) and will be fully capable of using it, but would prefer not to except in emergencies. That way he can still be the residant web swinger, and very effective.
| NeoNinja73 chapter 37 . 9/7
Thanks for the chapter~~