this is kne of my fav fanfics along eith catapilllar plz do a nother naruto MHS cross over your works are amazing

Just one question about the beginning of the chapter. What the hell are Kushina and her daughter doing at the scene? "We were attacked by a supervillain? Oh, it's okay, let's just stay there, in the ruins of the destroyed house. Why immediately evacuate to a safer place, like the police station..."

I don't know if this is supposed to be a sad chapter or not, but LMAO of all characters that could be dying, he's the one I expect the least and somehow logically could be in the Canon event

good fic. fun pairing, solid pacing & just the right length. My complaints are that the dialogue was abit cringe sometimes. Deku was payed too much attention for my liking in the beginning but thats kinda a me issue bc i hate deku LOL

I wish there was a chapter where they are married and have childeren you know? Like them as adults adults

i feel like an idiot... this is a story about and rabbit hero/goddess debateable and naruto who died to a rabbit goddess. i see what you did there. i swear that is hilarious. but i still feel stupid for not realizing. great story regardless i will probably see if you have more good stories those are hard to come by.

A near 80 year experience of being shinobi but gone done by such careless mistake. Since it wasn't like his weakness or her sound powers were unknown to him. I hope it isnt like those other fic where author's put fown mc just to show that he is not invincible but they dont care how they excute it. Like I dont mind him falling but jyst wish it was done well.

On an lighter note- is his fox just buffs his physical stats and senses? or does it have something else too to make it stand out? Wish he had some powers from kurama, and I am not talking about chakra cloak, or the biju bomb or gigantification but something like how kurama was able to extent his tails and use them as appendage. Also wish he had multiple tails too lol.

Bit I can see why you didn't include it too since it would be too powerful and sod breaking, especially since you are aiming for a technical fighting style fic. But still wish he had something from kurama as a momento lol.

Why help izuku tho especially after the reasoning he laid out at his feet. I dont like izuku as a character since like you said if people with quirk are training their body (like the big hand girl or the monkey boy) since they were kid just for their dream, izuku too should have put some effort(infact he should have put atleast ten times their effort since he is already disadvantaged). But no he kept bitching and living in his fantasy wishing for some magical powerup that will do his work for him.

That why I dont like mha since it spits on the fundamental truth that hardwork makes you achieve anything even if it seems impossible. But it to me rather feels like it reinforces the idea ofbe useless, dont put effort and wait for your nonexistent power up.

Hope naruto doesn't start playing second fiddle to izuku here and loose all his agency. Since I came to read him as an mc and not izuku.

Okay I can understand no chakra or other Naruto prowess, in fact I liked that you did that since that will help naruto synchronise with mha world at 100%, especially since he isn't reincarnated Naruto uzumaki but an OC with Naruto's memory.

But why you gotta break my sod by giving him two quirks which is impossible in that world. Especially since these two quirks are so far removed from each other that you can't even justify by saying that they are just one quirk.

Deku at 70% should be rivaling All Might. Also 70% is definitely faster than sound so I don’t know why Izuku can’t react to Naruto?

I need Mirko to call me a good boy fr fr

Bruh i love that you said at the beginning of this story that Naruto wouldn’t be op and that if people wanted that, they should “go elsewhere” because there are multiple op Naruto fics. Not saying I don’t like this story or anything I just find it funny you said that and now he has chains, bijuu cloak and Kurama XD

Damn the time skips are a little fast

‘She also got them big thunder thighs, and her big fat mommy milkers are to die for.’ My man Naruto is a man of culture I see.

Yandere Gyaru ftw!

Improved version of spider-sense? She should be practically untouchable now then considering spider-sense is basically just precognition