Reviews for The Fox and the Hare |
---|
steviemaqepoulsen chapter 47 . 7/14 Man too bad the lemon part was censored Really hope that Ff.N stops removing the adult rated series for having adult content |
7m28 chapter 1 . 7/14 "it was the exaggerated swagger of a mutant type quick user." LOL ok, not even 5 sentences in and I'm already loving this. |
Jiggly Joe chapter 27 . 7/9 I don't really see what's so special about the chains that All For One would abruptly show up on his own without any care for revealing his continued existence and, it seems, without any real plan to speak up beyond "Appear and take Quirk" which is extremely out of character for. Dude always has plans upon plans upon plans, but this just reeks of impulse. It makes sense in canon, the way he went ahead and just confronted the heroes and All Might, but this really, really doesn't |
Jiggly Joe chapter 6 . 7/9 Oh wait, I totally forgot, Aizawa HIMSELF has a knife he uses! |
Jiggly Joe chapter 6 . 7/9 I can understand not using knives in school but: Snipe uses a GUN Lady Nagant's quirk made HER a GUN There's a kid in Class B whose quirk is literally just blades. Again, I get not wanting Naruto to use throwing knives in a classroom environment but his shit about "blah blah blah heroes don't kill so don't use knives" makes absolutely no sense and is a completely arbitrary restriction he's trying to place on Naruto |
Borello chapter 48 . 7/8 good work |
ShadowBloodedge9396 chapter 48 . 7/8 Ravenous is putting it lightly, having sex in broad daylight in public after clearing out a gang fight, Mirko really is taking after her quirk, lmao. Good thing Naruto is there to ease her out of any developing self-hate from thinking her mom may have been right after all. Nice to see the plan going as well as it can so far, now to hope all goes well in the final battle next time. |
NewMystery356 chapter 48 . 7/7 Does them flopping out of bed count as the “Walk of Shame”~? I’ll be sure to catch the Lemon later, but I have to say, I’m eager to see how fast Re-Destro gets the business, and also how nucking futs things get when everyone jumps All for One~ Looking forward to more! |
bloodbrother 18 chapter 48 . 7/7 Post soon love the chapter |
Afro1Ninja8 chapter 48 . 7/7 The final battle is about to begin, cant wait to read it. |
Monster King chapter 48 . 7/7 Awesome work please continue the story your doing great |
Guest chapter 48 . 7/6 I got this funny feeling afo is going meet Kurama and it's not going to end well for him |
fallendemon248 chapter 48 . 7/7 Maybe AFO isn't ignoring them just that he can't do much, wasn't he at the point his body was almost ready to stop on him at this point in the story, wasn't that the whole point of tomura? Unless I missed something you changed in the story |
Gilgamesh50 chapter 48 . 7/7 Great Chapter |
ChaMy0 chapter 48 . 7/7 Hey author, have you ever thought about posting your stories on QuestionableQuesting? There you wouldn't need to remove the smuts and you can pin images, and the interaction with readers is very good. |