Reviews for The Fox and the Hare
aGnamZer0 chapter 13 . 5/16/2024
« If I hadn't stopped to admonish that Quirkless boy, maybe I could have gotten to USJ in time to stop the villains. »

Looks like All Might didn't, in fact, got impressed by Izuku's intervention.

Maybe Izuku will amaze him at the Sports Festival.

From what I've just seen of his determination and state of mind, I'm sure he will. And not to impress All Might– for himself!

Considering her martial arts background and the fact Mirko saved her son's life, it's no wonder Kushina is a die hard fan.

I hope Naruto has his weapons with him. As a ninja, even if he's not sure he wants to be a hero anymore, I'm pretty sure he has.

It'll be awesome to see Mirko and Naruto collaborate on taking down Stain.

And it proves Naruto's skills. Mirko normally would never have taken a first year student with her for such high risk mission, regardless of the student's skill. Mirko acknowledges Naruto.

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 12 . 5/16/2024
Surprisingly, the reporters actually asked many different questions about various angles of the USJ invasion, and most of them were actually pertinent.

Huh... Momo's words are indeed true. I suppose being a heiress of a wealthy conglomerate, she actually knows about public opinion, politics and such. Pity Naruto never got any Kage training or he would have realized too.

But Kushina put Naruto's worries to rest and that's awesome.

Still, I'm pretty sure All for One will end up successfully stealing Kushina's quirk one of those days. I hate the very idea.

I approve of Naruto's decision not to participate in the sports festival.

I'm so jealous of Minato and Kushina. I so want to hug Naruto too! *whining*

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 11 . 5/16/2024
Since no scars were mentioned (thankfully), I'll just consider his healing factor transferred over to this life. I'm glad.

I imagine the one killed student is the useless one no one cares about– Mineta?

I mean, without Izuku in the sea area, Mineta was doomed. In fact, Tsuyu is probably severely injured too.

It's not exactly a good thing for Eraserhead that the video got released since he's an underground hero and he's better off with the fewest people knowing about his quirk.

It's however an awesome thing for Naruto since it'll help his hero career (even if that has also, unfortunately, revealed his skills, much like Eraserhead).

I doubt people still remember pre-quirk movies and culture, but the reference to between the Nomu and Hulk was hilarious.

It's nice that Naruto's aware without Mirko, he would have died and he still needs a lot of training to stand at the peak.

I don't like Naruto's thoughts about quitting the hero course. I loved his comparison of heroes and mercenaries, and that's what makes his blood sing.

But I understand. He doesn't want to put his parents in danger or put himself in danger and risk leaving his parents alone to deal with their grief.

I don't care about Sato leaving. That boy is even more invisible than Tooru (despite his build), but I'm slightly sad for Tooru herself (the potential of her quirk is huge) and Koda (he's such a nice lad).

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 10 . 5/16/2024
The way Naruto fought reminded me of when he was overwhelmed by Kurama's chakra when he was a boy.

I just hope that part of his fox quirk is enhanced healing. Shukaku's jinchūriki had sand, Son Goku's lava, Matatabi's fire, Gyūki's ink, and Kurama's had regeneration. Please, let it be something Naruto kept.

I hate scars, and one of the greatest qualities of Naruto (in my perspective) was that he never got any scar. Even after Sasuke speared him in the heart, his skin remained unblemished (as can be proven, both in the manga and anime, when he's shirtless during his training with Kakashi to master his wind affinity and during his senjutsu training).

From the looks of Mirko's fight with thd Nomu, it looks like Naruto really handled himself like a champ. I'm not sure even Mirko would have lasted as long if she had fought the Nomu when be was at 100%.

I'm curious to see the reactions of the class to this epic showdown.

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 9 . 5/16/2024
The way Naruto and Aizawa fought and took down those petty villains was like a magnificent dance!

They didn't even give them the opportunity to send the students 1nd villains to others zones.

I love just how more powerful Naruto became through the awakening of one, and then two of his tails. It was breathtaking!

And the way he played with the Nomu with his ingenuous and meticulous use of shurikens and ninja wire was fantastic!

Still, rather than a bo staff, Naruto should have trained with katana. It would have more damages than kunais but would have kept the advantage of agility and speed.

But then again, if his claws are so powerful, maybe it's superfluous.

He's truly beautiful with red slitted eyes.

I do hope that the forceful release of his third tail won't have any unpredictable consequence though.

I hope Mirko will arrive in time to see just how arousing Naruto is when he fights both ferally and intelligently.

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 8 . 5/16/2024
Yep, I can totally imagine Naruto as some fox kit put off by someone trying to pet his tail. Adorable!

I'm glad Naruto beat soms preservation instinct into Izuku's mind as it's honestly what he lacked most.

And now, with Izuku's ruthless take down (it would have been more merciful to gauge his eyes *shudder*), All Might has probably finally found his successor.

I can totally see Miro refuse OFA by the way.

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 7 . 5/16/2024
Since I'm a total gay disaster, I was actually thinking of Izuku stuck to Naruto's back as he was lifting him and then ho much he bulked up. So attractive!

As for the girls, honestly, the one I find the cutest in the class is Mina (and the one I find the less beautiful os Uraraka). I'm no big fan of Kyōka, but I don't hate her.

I'm glad Naruto is getting closer to Eijiro.

I'm pretty sure that soreness in Naruto's back is his second tail pushing out.

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 6 . 5/16/2024
Looks like Kyōka realized the dangers her mistake could have had.

But as far as I'm concerned, it was a good thing since it allowed Naruto to realize one of his potential weaknesses.

I was wondering how Izuku got into U.A., but the general education curse, huh? Makes sense. Izuku's a genius.m (if only he had used his mind more in canon).

Eraserhead was rather hypocritical. He admonished Naruto for using bladed weapons but said nothing of Katsuki's overkill use of explosions, that, if they had touched Naruto, could have led to third degrees burns or worse.

I hope Naruto won't listen to Aizawa and blunt his weapons.

Also, am I the only one who saw how he completely skipped Mineta in his analysis report?

I decided to make him go through that experience sooner, in a controlled environment, to access his latent strength while he is still Quirkless in order to not cripple himself.

If I still had any doubt (maybe Izuku might truly become the first quirkless hero and OFA go to Mirio), your turn of phrase confirmed Izuku will indeed get OFA in the future.

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 5 . 5/16/2024
It's like a salad of cancer and AIDS.

How sickeningly illustrated. Pretty correct though, I agree with him about Katsuki. He's but a bully only a step away from being an actual villain.

I can understand the girls' reaction, but what the heck is with the guys?!

Wouldn't be surprised if they were all gays. Now that's it's not taboo anymore and a lot more accepted in society (LGBTQ culture), it's a lot easier for guys (and girls, and trans, and non-binary) to realize and acknowledge their own sexuality.

But yeah, here it's more likely they're interested about the whole All Might's recommendation thing (which again, I wonder how it happened).

Still, I love how aware Naruto is of his own cuteness. I'm pretty sure he died virgin in his first life, I wonder if he's bagged some guy or girl in this one.

Oh, well that explains it. All Might's suspicious of Naruto. I never thought the oaf could think that far ahead. Still, between the incident with the Chains and All Might's recommendation, Naruto's gonna become even more of a target for All for One (because he might have both quirks he's wanted for decades or centuries, the Adamantine Darling Chains, and One for All if he's All Might's successor).

I love the look of Naruto's costume. My favorite part of the Kitsune mask ANBU style since I had been hoping he would take one.

Once again, Naruto made quick work of Katsuki. The poor boy stood no chance against a veteran ninja.

Until he learns of a method to make up for the downsides of his quirk, certain opponents could pose a serious problem to him.

He doesn't have chakra to muffle sound if needed. The only possibility I see is actually using a support equipment to adjust the sound output at any given moment.

Kyouka didn't listen to Naruto's demand she stays put and thus put her own teammate out of commission. It's a minus for me.

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 4 . 5/16/2024
Indeed, despite his high accuracy and everything, Naruto would be completely defenseless against Endeavor.

I really do hope I was right and his Fox quirk can evolve and allow him more power as he gain more tails. Otherwise, he'd need to rely on the Adamantine Chains, and it's not really an option.

Still, I love how he refines his skills and does not let himself be let down by it, instead using it as fuel to become stronger. He's also lucky his parents support him unreservedly.

I do wonder how Izuku will get One for All now that he's been failed. I know he will since he's been tagged as an important character along with Naruto and Mirko.

I love how realistic you were though. It's not nine months of training that will change Izuku enough to allow him to get into U.A. when others students either trained longer or have much more powerful quirks (or both).

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 3 . 5/16/2024
So All for One is hunting for the Adamantine Sealing Chain quirk, huh? I doubt he missed the recent incident, and since Naruto was right in the middle of it, he might become a target (after all, as infinitesimal as it might be, he might be the one with the quirk, and if not, Naruto might have seen something that could give him a hint).

I wonder how Naruto got to be recommended by All Might for U.A.

I love how easily and casually Naruto took down Katsuki. It was quite satisfying.

I like the idea that Kiba's family might work underground (Yakuza, assassins or whatever). It'll be a good help and resource for Naruto since I doubt as a ninja, he'll restrain himself within the confines of the law, even when trying to become a hero.

As much as I usually despise All Might for his words, crushing Izuku's dream and only changing his mind embecause/em he gave his quirk to Izuku (All Might still believes a quirkless hero is impossible), Naruto's words are also true. Izuku never put in the effort to train and better himself. Fourteen years of training would not have been a luxury to put him to equal standing with others heroes hopeful, so with zero training and zero quirk, he's looking down on heroes.

Still, I appreciate Naruto still decided to train Izuku.

Naruto will NOT get the One For ALL quirk. He will use only his Fox Quirk and his ninja skills to become strong. I want this fic to capture the vibe of the old Naruto series where being skilled actually meant you could win the fight, rather than who had the most OP special skill.

I both approve this decision (I honestly believe it's for the best and I actually didn't expect Naruto to get One for All when I started reading it), but at the same time I'm frustrated by the waste of potential because with his fox body and his fitness, Naruto would have been able to use a high percentage of One for All from the get go.

He's also used to handling a lot of power (the energy of OFA probably slightly similar to chakra) and moving at his speed. Similarly, he's also experienced with flying and Black Whip is similar to how he handled Kurama's chakra cloak, creating hands of pure chakra.

So yeah, despite not it being something I wanted to read, I'm disappointed by the firmness of the decision. Will Naruto ever be able to stand on the same level as Izuku?

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 2 . 5/16/2024
From my perspective, it looks lile Naruto became overwhelmed by the memories and personality of his shinobi self.

Thankfully, he didn't disappear altogether. I imagine with some time, both Naruto will merge perfectly.

I'm not surprised he at first feared he was still in the Mūgen Tsukuyomi considering his last memories.

To be fair, it's not impossible, but it's however impossible to prove or get out of. So might as well consider it like his new reality and enjoy he's got a family this time.

So people believe it may have been a vigilante who killed the villain. Fair. Lile they said, Naruto's fox quirk is a bad match up, and there's no reason to believe he has two quirks (especially since none of his parents seemingly have it).

Though, from the same logic, one can wonder where his fox quirk came from since none of his parents have a similar heteromorphic quirk.

It's no wonder Naruto's milking his time with his parents to the fullest when be remembers being an orphan, and seeing others kids with their parents. I'm happy for him.

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 1 . 5/16/2024
Kiba's always been one of my favorite characters, so I'm glad he's Naruto's friend in this dimension.

In canon, he was one of the few (with Shikamaru and Chōji) who sometimes hung up with him when he was at the academy.

Both his and Naruto's quirk make sense and are reasonable.

Considering Naruto's quirk is a wink to Kurama, I imagine it'll be able to evolve until he gains nine (maybe even ten) tails, like a kyūbi-no-kitsune.

I think Naruto's character is pretty accurate on what he would have been had his parents not been dead nor leaders of the village, and he had not been otracized or abused.

I'm glad Naruto gained the Adamantine Sealing Chains, a hallmark of the Uzumaki clan.

It clearly also holds the ability to seal chakra, or here, quirks I imagine, which would explain why they were able to hold and even kill the Sludge Villain.

Thanks for the chapter.
Drake.Dman chapter 46 . 5/16/2024
en espera de mas
Borello chapter 46 . 5/16/2024
really interesting work
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