story is amusing, would love to see more of it

All your stories are self insert garbage.

While starting this i thought it was an actual but instead it turned out to be porn with a tiny bit of plot. As far as the actual story part goes it was pretty stupid. What kind of chuni bullshit is dragon power. Aqua said everyone passed on it cause they wanted immediate power and you’d have to work for the stupid dragon power and yet the second he dropped into the new world he was already overpowered with zero effort required so why wouldnt everyone have taken the instent god mode power? That aside this is a good example of how to not write an MC. Writer tried hard to write a man with an alpha personality but ended up stuck on douchbag instead. You can write a dominate personality and it doesnt even matter if the OCs in the world like them but they should still be likable to the reader and this gay little dragon chuni is just a douchbag with no redeeming character traits

It'd be interesting if he took the Hōgyoku as a cheat item. And used it to turn Gram into his Zanpakutō

And i want more of this one too dang it!

Awesome!

Awesome

I do think he shouldn't ghave gotten turn undead isnt exorcism just better version lioe priest vs arch priest
Saves a point for later to have an extra point to get better skill in a couple levels
Like debuff resistance

Also kinda not needed shadow sneak while useful could be done later and that 20 points could get advance magic in a couple level

He used what 75 of 78 remove those 2 it be 25 left
20 if getting be buff resistance either wait 5 for 10 points to get advance or get the other 3 useful break spell sacred shell and cure poison and have and have 13 left over
a few levels for 30 and get advance magic

Hopefully he saves aqua soon to bed both goddess
Maybe the Chimera general can not be a futa just a demon women
Plus just more waifus and cat girl dark goddess
Which to do so means get explosive loli and learning explosion
Obviously yunyun needs love like wiz

This is like a 13 yr olds wet dream in written form.

I jumped across buildings with my Wii in my backpack and turned around to clothesline my fastest pursuer. Fucker spun around my arm like real life was a cartoon before smashing to the ground.

Fucker, fuck it, fucker, cunt.

It's always cute when kids learn to use big adult words to sound more mature.

Well goddamn, I'm really loving this fic so far!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

ohhh la la.
Eheheheheh.
I WANN SEE SOME MORE!
SCHOTTISH FUN!
Maybe Some austrailian respect?
"Japanese are weak fucks, Americans are fat shits, Asians can't see for shit, But the Scottish and Australians? Well we're built different, We scottish have conquering in our veins, Australians face animals that can kill ya in ten different ways with a fucking foot, We scottlands are obviously better, But the don't count out those Aussies, They don't give two fucks who you are"

SCOTLAND FOREVER!
*PAGPIPES PLAY AT FULL VOLUME!*

Gahahah!
Well Well Well.
Any wish I want?
Well Godhood Is truly what I would wish for.
Right behind that is Immortality, And the ability to travel the dimensions.
And If I can't get any of that?
Infinite reincarnation into different worlds while retaining every single power that I have gained from my past ones with the ability to shut off memories and powers to make it more interesting.

I almost dread to think what would happen if an AUSSIE got sent there.
He'd be completely fire immune, reckless, fearless, charismatic, and almost exactly like this Scottish guy. One difference tho, the Australian would look at the monsters and call em little, before asking where the actual monsters where.

I like Yarden.
Bro know's what to be, want's to be a god/divine (Already a MASSIVE check in my books), Catholic/Christian, and has martial art's training.
It's like a version of me that doesn't have ADHD, is Scottish instead of Aussie, and still does Karate!
I am a Black Belt Tho, and intend to get my old strength and abilities back...