Reviews for Along Came a Spider 2 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you and congrats! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulations on the acceptance to the writing program! That sounds exciting and I'm so proud of you! (Not that I had anything to do with it.) With these new revelations/confirmations, I hope they go as smoothly as Bella hopes, but I'm not sure that's realistic. I especially hope that Royce sees her s an ally, not an adversary. Same with Alice. I'm also loving the potential of Leah and Jason. That was an unexpected development. I also have to say that Roy is reacting much more graciously than I've seen in the past. I feel badly for Charlie, though I'm glad that Bella reinforced that he's still her dad. Stay safe and well! xo Nan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulations on being accepted into the television and screenwriting program…what an honor and exciting time for you! Wow…So much happened in this chapter….we know definitively that Roy King is Bella’s father, Esme is filing for divorce, the Stars keep winning in the playoffs. I hope we find out where Carlisle has been hiding all this time. Looking forward to the twins being born….and Edward holding up the Stanley Cup. Thanks so much. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love this and crazy the turn this has taken. Hope Roy will be a good guy… |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Roy is Bella's biological father. And he seems to be real happy about. I hope they can find a way to be one big happy family. As for Leah and Jason, is there something there? I was still rooting for James and Leah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t understand why Bella thinks it’s necessary for Charlie to legally deny paternity. She’s an adult, and she wasn’t even thinking about things like inheritance. Clearly Roy already has definitive, DNA proof. Seems odd. Thanks for a new chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Roy should have approached Bella once he knew she was his daughter instead of operating in the background, invading her privacy by bugging her practice and obtaining blood-samples by dubious means and leaving little clues hoping she'd connect the dots. Rather cowardly for such an influential man. She and her parents took the monumental news quite well, I guess it has to sink in and what comes with it. I hope Royce will react positive to gaining a sibling. Jason and Leah - didn't expect this pairing. What a great start for Leah in her nee hometown. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m not sure how I feel about this chapter. Why does Bella need to have Roy as her father? Why must Charlie give up paternity? This is so not how he expected Bella to treat Charlie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've forgotten how is Alice related to Edward, are they cousins? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so happy for you! How wonderful to find a new outlet for your talent. As always, this was a great chapter and I plan to go back to the first fanfic sooner rather than later. - Deb VanAntwerp |
![]() ![]() ![]() First, congratulations on your acceptance into your TV and screenwriting program. I'm excited for you. Thanks for the update. Lots going on. If I were Bella, my head would be spinning. Sadly, I'm not headed for TFMU this year either. I'll miss all the gals and hugs for sure. Big hugs to ya, Pam. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED! I knew ROY was Bella's biological father .. and my heart sure does hurt for Charlie having to forfeit is rights to Bella being his daughter :( ... I wish that didn't have to change. I would have thought that the DNA evidence was enough when it comes to inheritance etc? I just hope that Bella doesn't get lost in being Royce's daughter and forget about her Dad. But this gives me hope that it won't. *** "Bella, we both know you can," he admits sadly. "But that's the difference. I won't." *** **"It doesn't change anything between us. You know that I love you. You will always be Dad to me and Grandpa Swan to the twins,"*** .. Was Charlie always going to be known as Grandpa Swan? Or is it just because Royce is now in the picture he is automatically going to be called Grandpa? I LOVE that Esme is going to divorce Carlisle .. and I do hope she finds what she is looking for in life, that woman sure does deserve it! I think once it's announced that Bella is a King, Carlisle will reappear! Leah and Jason, I am so down for that! LOL LOVED and so cannot wait for more Xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, Leah’s here! Roy, you ARE the father! I think they’re both excited to explore this relationship between them. I can’t believe we only have 4 chapters left! |